Thank you. A story with these two are lacking nowadays for some distressing reason. I am pleased to see Byakuya submitting.

U r such a tease! Splitting such lovely smutty chapter into parts...
But my! such special gift... *Lecherous eyebrow wiggling*

I have to say the first three chapters of the fic were okay. Not bad, just okay. But this epilogue.. Oh my god I loved it haha! I think your writing was much better in the last part. And since I prefer Hichigo anyways, I really enjoyed reading. Thank you for having such a perverted imagination! _

I will never look at a cucumber the same ever again...

Soul-Chan: I'll get the mop. You bled all over the floor.

That was HOT. Ok, you got me horny on that one. And yeah, cucumbers are most frequently used in sex or making love. A very natural toy. Hahahaha... Nice going. It was a blast!

*stares story while having a nonstop nosebleed* that...was...AWESOME!

I love it when Hichi gets to come out to play too, hehehehehe :) That was an AWESOME story :)

O/o

...*tries to speak but can't*...*tries again*...*suceeds this time*

That...That POOR cucumber! I'll never be able to eat one again!*wails* Though I must admit that was pretty hot. And even if you don't tell me I have to ask. Where did you find info on the cucumber sex? :D

~Hugs,

ShadowsOfPenAndPaper

Hi,

This is a really nice story, full of hot moments.
But I'm a bit confused on something.

On chapter 1 you wrote:

"Byakuya felt a fresh surge of desire at those words, knowing immediately where they would lead. He was surprised; Ichigo rarely let him top him."

and then on chapter 3 you wrote:

"Ichigo gasped as these words penetrated his mind; it was true, he'd wanted to be the seme in their relationship for so long. He couldn't believe that Byakuya was going to let him top him".
On the first phrase, it looks as if Ichigo is the seme of the relationship and Byakuya will be seme on that night. But on the second one, it seems as Byakuya is the seme. Do you mind explaining please? Thank you.
Love,

P.

please add an epilouge

please add another chapter. i love this story.

Question, could a cucumber really fit up that? Grat sotry any way, really passionate... love your puns...

Gosh. THAT'S THE END! what a let down _ you need longer chapters and . . . YOU CAN'T JUST STOP AT A CLIFFY! O: rawr. If you want to end it I sugest you don't leave any room for another chapter. _ FLYING PANCAKES! :D -don't ask inside joke-

ur addicting u kno that. u an ur fics r better that crack (not that it kno but w/e). yet another mind-blowing fic.:sigh:. Ja ne

That was amazing! Cucumbers...hm!