:D :D :D :D :D

Awh, I wish canon had included this. That would've been absolutely phenomenal.

Well done Rose, well done!

I'm torn in between screaming OMG! Rose took her clothes completely off! And Could you take the Doctor's clothes off too? HeeHee :D

The Doctor, held up his sonic screwdriver. “Oh, you did lock it.” He reassured her, cheerfully. - Love the beginning, of course he WOULD show up at an inappropriate time, when she can't be all enthusiastic.

“But those rules only applied on the Tardis. I remember. You wrote up this huge list of rules of personal space on the Tardis, and this isn’t the Tardis. For one thing, it’s not bigger on the inside,” - Cheeky bugger, he must have driven her a little mad...she must have been quite mad to write him a list.

Rose rolled her eyes, she would so give money to learn the secret of how to make a dead lock seal. - LOL Poor thing, I too would like to understand more about the dead lock seal like: WHY CAN'T HE OPEN IT? and Why doesn't he make the screwdriver better?

“You do seem more pink and yellow then you usually do.” He noted...“I like it.” - Aaw so unexpected, I love that scene were he describes her she just doesn't know how to take it. I can't believe he did it on purpose! Good on Rose for slapping him.

That was good!

LOVE IT!

Very cute. I think my favorite line was when Rose was wondering how she could make a dead lock seal.

The Doctor! A dirty old man! Love it! xx

:D The Doctor as a dirty old man. Me likes. Thank you for the smile, the laugh, and the fluff.

Denni

The Doctor was a little out of character, and I don't think this situation would ever come about (on or off-screen) but still a fun read.

(By the way, he's oblivious, not obvious, in the second paragraph.)

8 out of 10 stars.

aw! I love shameless reunion fics!

Oh this is very cute! Serves him right though that slap.

That made me smile! :) Fantastic job.

All the best,

-LM

That was intresting.

Maria