| Reviews for Pyramid Solitaire |
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Emilia Delko chapter 1 . 2/2/2011 I know this is late but caro dio. You did a pretty damn good job on showing Calleighs insecurities. |
DELETEFROMINTERNET chapter 1 . 2/7/2008 Pure genius. |
zelda49 chapter 1 . 2/1/2008 Gosh, this just broke my heart. I love your style here, with the clipped phrases, the parenthetical thoughts-it really drives home the anguish they both are feeling. And I like, too, that there's hope at the end, that it's not all about how bad things are after Tim died, but that they might get through it. Great Job! |
leyrey01 chapter 1 . 1/31/2008 I love your stories. They are so descriptive and the way that you describe how the characters are feeling is wonderful |
restless-mess chapter 1 . 1/29/2008 Ah! This was so good! It was so angsty and ... I didn't even have a favourite part, I just loved it all! |
Lemon Green chapter 1 . 1/29/2008 Wow, that was...amazingly dysfunctional. You did really well, and it totally broke my heart. |
bookworm1094 chapter 1 . 1/29/2008 Awesome! I lovd it! I needed a pick-me-up and this was it! Great story! Calleigh and Eric belong together. I loved the part when he said you first. Brillaint! Keep Writting! |
brookeAp3 chapter 1 . 1/29/2008 I love your writing! You wrote Calleigh's inner struggle really well. Great job! |
TheDistractedWriter chapter 1 . 1/29/2008 great job! i loved it ] |
Le Pecore Nere chapter 1 . 1/29/2008 this story is awesome :) normally I wouldn't say that angst and romance go together, but with Eric and Calleigh, it just screams for such, and even still it could be humor/romance, some fluff, drama/romance, I have to say this has to be a very versitle pairing b-d and you know how to handle all of them. Great job. |
Jessica237 chapter 1 . 1/29/2008 Oh, so much angst! I love it, heh. :) And it's present tense, something I've oddly been liking lately, and there's a bit of Calleigh pushing Eric against the wall too! Excellent. :D You did a wonderful job of staying true to both of their characters, with Eric's feelings, and especially with Calleigh's need to avoid those very emotions in herself, and her trying to make it about Tim when it's long past the point of being about Tim. I absolutely felt Eric's pain and frustration; you illustrated that extremely well. Excellent job! :D |
Alebarda chapter 1 . 1/29/2008 WOAH! I like SO much your style of writing and telling a story! This story seems to scream "Feeling, not sentimentalism" and is THAT that makes this story so gorgeous! I'm waiting for your next story/chapter! Bye |
calleighsthebest chapter 1 . 1/29/2008 This is awesome! I can so see that happening between them! This is really well written as well! Thanks! |
Moriel21 chapter 1 . 1/29/2008 Luce, I'm fairly sure I have said this before (I kinda think I say this every time) but I think you are the Queen of E/C angst! This was brilliant, tugging-on-heartstrings-emotional with just a tiny bit of cuteness and fluff thrown in at the end so I didn't have to throw any pies at you!;) I loved it! And I am SO glad she said "okay"! |
CarolinaDawn chapter 1 . 1/29/2008 Wow...very angsty...and so very good! I loved the ending, how the minutes turned to hours before she answered Eric. I loved that Eric was able to get Calleigh to realize how their encounters weren't just about Speed's death anymore and that perhaps she really does share the same feelings as Eric. |