| Reviews for Pretty Ore |
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Elle chapter 1 . 6/19 I’ve watched this on YouTube years ago! And didn’t know up until today that you wrote it on ! Gonna read this! |
Junya chapter 12 . 12/9/2019 This fanfiction is awesome! I read it over the weekend while I was sick, and I loved every bit of it. I haven’t played Friends of Mineral Town for quite some time, but it’d be a lie to say that I didn’t have a soft side for HM fanfiction. I even checked out the Youtube miniseries... which I actually recognized as being one that I watched when I was younger! How time flies... Anyway, I had a lot of fun reading this. You’re a great author! |
amel.chan24 chapter 1 . 12/10/2018 Hiii! It's been 10 years I've been shipped this fanfic! I love it as the best fanfic of Graire I ever read. I feel like Gray and Claire had been the most loved character in Harvest Moon MFoMT/BTN Girl. I dont know why their relationship are the most awkward and lovely at the same time. I read the fanfic while listening songs, which it touched my feelings so much! Great job! Plus, I've been read this for 10 years! thanks a lot! Thanks for making Gray and Claire end with happy and best ending. The rest of the stories would be continued by our thought of what will be happen for them. I made Graire fanfic (rated M) but they ended bad ending so that's why I felt more guilty about them. LOL Anyway, thanks a lot for the fanfic. It's so beautiful |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/6/2018 Harvest Moon characters embody a certain innocence - almost a purity that makes them so captivating and lovable. You hit on some of that innocence in Claire and Gray's early interactions. But that aura that these characters have was completely shattered when you added in the adult content. Now obviously you get married on Harvest Moon and have a baby and we all know how that happens. But it is never part of the game. The beauty of Harvest Moon is its innocence. These are not your characters and in explicitly writing about them having sex, you destroyed that innocence. |
Charissa Sophia de la Rosa chapter 12 . 12/28/2017 Hey there! I didn't finish reading chapter one and went straight to favoriting it because after seeing a few words, I suddenly felt a sense of deja vu and I thought "Hey, this is familiar." That's why I rechecked the title and I then remembered reading/watching it in YouTube before when I was a kid. I really loved those series of videos and ever since seeing them, I became a huge GrayxClaire fan. And so I searched the title of this story in YouTube and lo and behold! It's the same series of videos I saw when I was a kid. That's why I didn't continue reading it and instantly favorited it. Thank you so much for writing this story and for creating those videos in YouTube! :) |
Syauri804 chapter 12 . 7/7/2017 THE BEST FANFIC EVER! Okay, i know it's too late to review now... But still! Most romantic fanfic i've read! Btw, i've seen your videos on Youtube 3 |
GwendyMary chapter 12 . 6/2/2017 OMG OMG! I can't stop screaming! I love this story so freaking much, as much as i love Harvest Moon ever since i was little. This is so beautiful, it gives a roller-coaster feeling to my emotion! I love it! Thank you so much for writing this, and wish me luck! I just started to play HM again and i hope i can marry Gray |
rosebud90 chapter 12 . 5/23/2017 I love your story it's one of my fav its funny u did a great hub |
Phoebe chapter 9 . 4/15/2017 Phoebe(aka me): *overheard this while walking by their farm with my husband Won (yes I always marry Won in the game, he is my hubby)* "Oh my god why can't they just admit they love each other?!" *turns to Won* "Ugh I want to say something to them about this!" Won: "I think it would be best if you didn't interfere. It'll only make things worse for them." Phoebe: "But it's so obvious it hurts! It almost physically hurts me how obvious it is." Won: *starts leading me away from the farm* "Just let it go, they'll figure it out." Phoebe: "Yeah, your right. You tend to know more about these things then me anyway. Let's go." (This was intended to be short, but then I got bored and it ended up being a lot longer than it was originally intended to be. Plus I just like writing things with my hubby in them) |
37Penship Beatrice chapter 1 . 2/4/2017 I remembered watching the Pretty Ore animation on youtube in 2008, then finding it on Fanfiction just to know how the story finished. I can't believe after all these years I found this story again -, it was extremely cute and the development between Claire and Gray was really well done. Chapter twelve had the most memorable scenes; the passing of gas scene XD was absolutely funny, and the proposal scene was beautifully well done. I really enjoyed this story. |
witchofthisage chapter 12 . 9/13/2016 the amount of fluff is so overwhelming; i love it! i love that it wasn't filled with so much unnecessary drama, but it still portrayed a very accurate depiction of how complete strangers can find solace in each other and grow closer. this is the most delightful graire fic among the dozens that i binge-read just this week. i have a feeling i'm gonna keep going back to it time and time again. |
OceanEyesFanfics chapter 12 . 8/15/2016 You are my role model in writing! I really loved this story, and though there were some parts that made me gape at the screen, it was really well written. I really liked Claire's personality, and I really liked the way you didn't make her blandly cheerful and peppy, like other people imagine her. I also liked the realistically-cute relationship. Thanks for the great story! You can really go far with your writing style! Don't stop now! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2016 i saw your videos before...*squealls* im soo excited i thought this looked familliar |
Talonis Wolf chapter 12 . 4/30/2016 Best proposal scene I've ever read, well done! There were a few places where the pacing of the story seemed to 'stutter', but you always quickly recovered- most would have their story 'stutter' and die without realizing until after. Overall, 4/6, where 6 is impossible-to-reach perfection and 5 is something which etches itself into your psyche. |
dianarose.espadilla chapter 12 . 4/27/2016 BEST. PROPOSAL. EVER. If only that could happen in real life! X( BEST FANFIC EVER! |