Reviews for Burnt Offerings
Sofie chapter 9 . 3/19/2014
wauw that was really good, i never imagined a way like this could add Vincent to Kingdom Hearts in an acceptable way - it is rather sad they dont remember him though, poor Vincent. I will look forward to the next chapter, if such exists
Erilin-chan chapter 9 . 11/15/2013
Really interesting story, I really enjoyed the read. The plot idea was great, the switching from character to character was easy enough to understand. I love the idea that Leviathan was IN her, although it was a little frustrating not knowing what it was saying (but obs that's the point! lol). Interesting read, I'll probably read the spins off too!
Hades, I thought, was brilliant, just the right amount of cunning and Disney feel. I've not played KH, but I've read another story that melds the two together, and I enjoyed this just as much as that one. Nice story!
Achi J chapter 9 . 3/22/2011
i don't understand the lack of love for this fic, because it was BEAUTIFUL. seriously. i love how it's subtle and hopeful and bittersweet, and how you've woven KHverse and FFverse so seamlessly. wutaimulanverse genius! Hats off to you ;)
auditoryeden chapter 7 . 2/21/2011
I just thought you might want to know that the line you have Leviathan saying about half-way down the page translates to "I will go, if that is your FISH", not WISH, which is I imagine you intended to say.

E femm ku, ev dryd ec ouin vecr. Pid cissuh sa.

That "v" translates to an "f" in English. Thus "Fish" not "Wish".
Hiei17 chapter 2 . 3/26/2010
I can only hear James Woods portraying Hades when I read this - and I love it. Oh, James Woods!
hUeS -of- h a z e l chapter 9 . 10/1/2009
This is absolutely wonderful.

I can't wait for the sequel!
DW Yoru Okami chapter 9 . 9/30/2009
Oh Nagia,

I don't even know where to begin. Well, first off, your portrayal of the characters is, as always, a pleasure to read. You give them a depth of originality they'd have for being new people with new lives, but keep the old character and the personality right there. I enjoyed it because the style is something you don't see everyday either. I'm not sure exactly what it is, but you manage to pull the reader in and keep them there. At least I was. The ending serves as a cliff hanger, yet it ties everything together as well. That's always a hard thing to do.

Also, thank you for the Greek mythology you tied into the story, with the Disney characters and the actual historical myth. Finally, thank you for updating! Your one-shots have tied me over just barely, and after a bad day at work coming home to find an email alert for this just made my day.

I really do love this tale, from the way you set up an alternative universe that's believable, to how you made it seem very canon. I loved this story, and hope the sequel is just as amazing (and has faster updates ;) )

Yoru
serenbach chapter 9 . 9/30/2009
Yay, I'm so happy you've updated this. Can I just say I love your Auron? He's perfect. This, while obviously leaving some loose ends, tied up the story well and left room for new threads- jealous Yuffie, maybe? I love you're burnt offerings universe and I can't wait for you to add to it. :)
KibaCanLickMe chapter 9 . 9/29/2009
I was super excited to see this update in my email. It was a good chapter though I guess I was hoping to see more recognition from AVALANCHE or even for Auron to recognize Rikku, especially since he remembers Yuna. Anyway, I'll be anxiously awaiting any sequel you put out in hopes for a happier reunion and some romance.
KibaCanLickMe chapter 8 . 9/25/2009
Please don't have abandoned this story, I'm really really really interested in what's going to happen next.
champagnesupernova72 chapter 8 . 6/5/2009
This is such an amazing story, it is so well thought out and complex, I absolutely love it. I know it hasn't been updated in a while, but I hope an inspirational something hits you soon, can't wait!
The Wild Samlet chapter 8 . 5/10/2009
Oh please continue this! I know you haven't updated in a year, but it's so good!
serenbach chapter 8 . 3/10/2009
Wow, I really enjoyed this, I love how you have woven together the FFVII, FFVI and KH worlds with Greek mythology. I loved the way the charcters all relate to each other, I love how the KH group really do act like a family. I'm very excited that Yuffie and Vincent have met and I hope that you do update this! :)
Qualia Des chapter 8 . 3/2/2009
Hope you update this wonderful story again someday! :D
DW Yoru Okami chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
And so me having no life, has made me read it yet again. And you're up for an Award. Nice, and every story I've read from those have been good. So, it's clear to me, you need to update this. Really you do.

*Blink*

If I give you a cookie will that help? Maybe two? Anyway as always I love your work.

Yoru
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