please continue. i must know how this goes!

please update soon, i love your story and the way things are turning. Along side with the drama.I would love it if it would progress don't rush i can't tell you how many fanfics do so...also,I kinda would like to pimp out my story "Tainted Love" and i find it awesome that we share some heritage.i'm of irish/mexican/german/american decent!D

Umm she wrote this in 2008 correct me if I'm wrong but that was before Breaking Dawn so her story stands quit bashing!

Why the hell did you have Jacob imprint on Julia? That messes up the whole story. They're better if you stick to the facts of the book. I kind of dont want to read it anymore now. Sorry.

Well dont you think that he would know? If an imprint is as strong as they say it is and how they can memorize and smell peoples scents, dont you think he immmediatly wouldve recognized her and known who she was? Just asking.

Um Quil is spelled with only one L. It's a very uncommon name, actually i dont even know if its real, thats why the red line comes up when you spell check it. But theres only one L. BTW

I really like your story. The concept is intriguing. I perceive Claire as maybe being a bit of a nerd. And I mean that in the best possible way. Like one of those girls with glasses and booksmarts and you have to do a double take because she's pretty as well.

With all the dynamics - with her mom and Emily and her cousins and the pack - I'm intersted to see how things with her and Quil play out. I would love to see your interpretation of the shifted pack, so hopefully that's coming up at some point.

My single piece of advice: get yourself a Beta. Someone to proofread and spellcheck for you. Another set of eyes. You have some grammar/mechanical trouble spots and for the most part it's not too troublesome. But every now and then an error or run on will really throw off the flow of an entire chunk of text. And we don't want that!

My suggestion would be to check your readership's profiles. Some of them may have beta profiles here on FFn. Plus, they're already familiar with your story on a basic level. If that doesn't work out try "Project Team Beta". All they do is beta Twifics. They're the go-to gals (and guys?).

-GND

I like it. Just stop using so many whatchamacallits, ellipsis-things. ("..." for those who don't know what an ellipsis is.) It gets a little bit annoying after a while. Other than that, I really like this story.

Would u pretty plz write a new chap? U r a great writer and u should be given a medal or sumthin

Nuttigirl

Heey, great chapter and amazing story!

when do you post the next chapter, it's been a while?

Argh what was the point in her getting that pther car, she's just going to end up with Quil's anyway :P

Small mistake:"I smiled at the thought, it was moments like these that Claire could actually imagine the two of them being sisters."- You changed from the first person to the third person here.

I love your story so far :) Just a little bit of nitpicking- you don't always get the right one of the following words: "there" "their" "your" and "you're"

hey..i really like your story.. i just wish for more

i like this story so much, which is why the rate it's progressing is soo frustrating. it's chapter 36 jane is still a cold horrible woman and quil and claire's future is looking pretty bleak. i wouldn't be surprised if jane tries to leave with claire.

Could you please give me a short summary of what has happened before this chapter, because honestly I can't remember what this was about. If you tell me I'll probably remember it.. Thanks!