| Reviews for Adventures in Child Care and Other One Shots |
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Guest chapter 17 . 5/20 Please add speech marks to the dialogue, its lack makes the story difficult to read. |
Guest chapter 9 . 5/20 a Lumos - a Wand-Lighting Charm You are confusing the incantation with the spell's name. |
typo chapter 9 . 5/20 nobodythreatens - nobody threatens That aside I really really want to this one continued. |
NazgulBelserion chapter 6 . 5/19 This one made me laugh so hard |
eagermeager chapter 12 . 2/13 That was a great twist! Nice oneshot! |
Guess chapter 9 . 11/25/2019 Damn.. Hermione was a bitch |
typo chapter 10 . 8/5/2019 sureshe - sure she |
typo chapter 9 . 8/5/2019 nobodythreatens - nobody threatens Please write more of this, aside from the Master of Death one, this is probably your most interesting story snippet |
typo chapter 9 . 8/5/2019 Legilimency, not Legilimancy |
typo chapter 17 . 8/5/2019 "at his their calling his name" Sentence that got a bit mangled |
Dzerx chapter 9 . 5/17/2019 Damn. I'd love to see someone turn this into a fanfiction. |
Lightning Strikes Multi chapter 6 . 1/2/2019 The math here is confusing me. If S is 1/2 H. And H is 1/2 L. Then S is 1/4 L from this H. Where’s the 1/3 coming from? |
phantomzeke chapter 6 . 5/24/2018 I have nothing constructive to say, just that I almost died choking on laughter. Thank you |
Miis chapter 12 . 5/20/2018 Omg the reveal in the end, totally unexpected and extra awesome! |
Guest chapter 15 . 5/19/2018 Now this is some badass Dumbledore! |