Reviews for Adventures in Child Care and Other One Shots
Guest chapter 17 . 5/20
Please add speech marks to the dialogue, its lack makes the story difficult to read.
Guest chapter 9 . 5/20
a Lumos - a Wand-Lighting Charm

You are confusing the incantation with the spell's name.
typo chapter 9 . 5/20
nobodythreatens - nobody threatens

That aside I really really want to this one continued.
NazgulBelserion chapter 6 . 5/19
This one made me laugh so hard
eagermeager chapter 12 . 2/13
That was a great twist! Nice oneshot!
Guess chapter 9 . 11/25/2019
Damn.. Hermione was a bitch
typo chapter 10 . 8/5/2019
sureshe - sure she
typo chapter 9 . 8/5/2019
nobodythreatens - nobody threatens

Please write more of this, aside from the Master of Death one, this is probably your most interesting story snippet
typo chapter 9 . 8/5/2019
Legilimency, not Legilimancy
typo chapter 17 . 8/5/2019
"at his their calling his name"

Sentence that got a bit mangled
Dzerx chapter 9 . 5/17/2019
Damn. I'd love to see someone turn this into a fanfiction.
Lightning Strikes Multi chapter 6 . 1/2/2019
The math here is confusing me. If S is 1/2 H. And H is 1/2 L. Then S is 1/4 L from this H. Where’s the 1/3 coming from?
phantomzeke chapter 6 . 5/24/2018
I have nothing constructive to say, just that I almost died choking on laughter. Thank you
Miis chapter 12 . 5/20/2018
Omg the reveal in the end, totally unexpected and extra awesome!
Guest chapter 15 . 5/19/2018
Now this is some badass Dumbledore!
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