D: i wanted to keep reading but it ended right there, please upadate the wait is killing me

i just wanted to say that i just read this and hell bound and i think your writing is absolutely amazing 3 i totally understand that you're going through hard times right now but i'll be waiting for an update!

love it please more

I quite love your story, my dear. I love the fact of keeping the characters true to themselves, whilst revealing the inner, um, ferocity of each. You are an astounding author.

-Me

Wow. Its been like three years sense the update but im hopeing you will one day return to write more. You cut it off at a clog hanger!

Please write more.

So its been a year since the last update. Hm...will there ever be an ending? Or at least another chapter?

Duh duh DUH! Oh mah lordie lordie what is to become of this storie next? Update ASAP! Why are you still reading this? Start typing already! XD

Are you dead?

Its been a while since you continued this story, are you done with it? Because I absolutely love it, and you are a marvelouse writer, no lie.

You have true talent, and I really wish you would continue this story.

the suspence is killing me plez tell me thier well be another chapter soon

Oh My God!

UPDATE!

I can't stop reading, especially at such a big cliff hanger.

So...

"Hearing her screams of pain as he shoved his rage deep inside of her would be quite rewarding."

I have never blushed so much in my entire life...and I have read countless romance novels, some of them complete raunchy (imagine this line, “she felt his heartbeat in her c**t”, yeah, I know. But still, your line made me blush more.). I cant even re-read that sentence without turning scarlet and laughing nervously... crazy.

Anyway, this is a rather lovely piece of work, and the chemistry between our loves is gold. I just sat here and read this entire thing... and I'm at work, haha.

Toby is rather annoying in this story, by the way. Perhaps... if he talked less...haha. He never annoyed me in the movie, but he's annoying me here. Strange.

And I have absolutely no feelings whatsoever for whatshisface, Woodhull or whatever. None. No attraction. No dislike. Nothing. (he’s no Skelter, m, man) Which is exactly how I want to feel about him, goodjob. P.S. I love the Todd jealousy card. Brilliant.

OH! and the scene with Lucy's rotting abhorred self - an absolute gem. I was like... shut up, you worthless trash. Even in death, she bitches. What Benny was thinking, I have no idea.

I shall let you go now, seeing as how I'm neglecting my duties. Update as fast as your fingers and mind allow.

hey girl.. def need to update soon. i love these stories.

is the next chap a sweenett...i hope it is ur doing great

im with you lucy is a bitch...go team lovett #1