| Reviews for Jupiter's Pet |
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mariapotter1 chapter 1 . 6/26/2019 I am so sad this story wasn't continued. It had such an interesting and premise. Hope some day you'll continue this. This is my third time reading it. |
cm16 chapter 2 . 2/4/2019 Hola tu historia es muy interesante y cada tanto la chequeo por si la continuas. Por las dudas la releo para no perder detalle. Por favor no la abandones y gracias- |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/8/2018 Continue please. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2018 I read this story 6 years ago and it's still just as interesting! Sad to see it hasn't been updated. Thanks for writing it. :) |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/25/2018 This is amazingly my. Update soon please. |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/24/2017 Next please. |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/21/2017 Continue s great. |
fanfic3112 chapter 4 . 9/5/2017 Oh my gosh I absolutely loved this story! It was fantastic. You should upload it on Ao3! Can't you pllleeeessseeaaassseee write more! You left off at a climax and I can't wait to see what happens next! Even if you don't post more here you could post what you have here on Ao3 and then finish the story! I can't wait to see what the "agreement" is! So many possibilities! I love that when Iason came in he loved just hearing Riki's voice, him liking something and then was amused still him not liking something. You could just feel the warmth it gave him hearing Riki's voice and being near him and you know he was glad to hear him cussing and acting like himself. Reassuring Iason Riki was still himself because in truth Iason liked Riki's rather shocking and defying nature. He would never want to see him lose that completely. Is he going to say "Jupiter has agreed to let me court you as a potential pairing partner". I can see Riki loving that, with Iason having to prove he can behave and agree to his rules for a change including asking for sex instead of telling Riki or jumping on him, no punishments based on whims, jealousy and only on a consistent set of rules or even better...that all punishment must be left for Jupiters decision not his. Then Riki truly acting like he's going to consider it and having Iason go to the art show with him and yet Riki getting to decide whist happens more like a date. Then Riki saying he is going yo consider Iasons requests with others and pretending he us considering other offers as well. Maybe even that boy that's following him around. Who knows what will happen. Maybe the agreement was for Riki to be owned by both Iason and Jupiter. I really want to know what will happen! Maybe jiter has only agreed to allow Iason to visit Riki weekly and to accompany him places like the art show. I can see Iason trying yo subtly seduce Riki and making Riki horney and him trying not to give into it. I can even see Jupiter stating Iason may watch Riki masturbate if Riki chose to do so and Iason trying to work Riki up to doing that and Riki deciding to just to tease him and make him want him more. Yet with Riki being watched 24/7 they can't actually have sexy hen at dome point Iason pulling Riki to him and seeing him. Riki at first shocked then struggling then giving in and falling into a rythum with him becoming pkiable against him til the droid comes up and says "remove yourself from the pet" and Riki being pushed back softly by Iason both staring at one another as a string of saliva freaks apart between them and Riki is dazed eyes blown wide. A look of need in Iasons eyes stares hard story him and the drones light flashes red across Iasons forarm where the both realize his hands are tightly gripped on Riki's forearm. Riki suddenly stands up pulling out of Iasons grasp. Realizing the droid might try to hurt him. "I think you should go lord mink" he says. Iason stands. He holds his gaze then disregarding the droid he puts his hands lightly on Riki's upper arms and kisses his forehead lightly and stands back, turning abruptly and walks thru the floor. Then pauses and turns to look at Riki. "I will be back Riki." And he leaves. He walks briskly to the elevator remembering the taste of Riki's lios he had so missed and goes to his penthouse closes the door. Walks passed his furniture ignoring him. Grabs a glass of wine from a side table and stalks to the patio. Standing where he has watched Riki stand so often. Where it now feels empty without him. The whole world has lost color without him. Every room feels empty without those flashing dark eyes to come home to. That dark flesh to curve himself around. The taste. The intoxicating smell of him. The sounds of his moans. The salt of his tears on his tongue and the ampke show of his pleasure on his tongue. The warm velvety heat to sink into. The glass shatters in Iasons hand. Red liquid spilling over the balcony, as he opens his hand to the shattered glass that tinkles onto the ground reflecting rainbow colors of light like prisms of colors mingled with red. The first colors to grace the penthouse since the day he walked out. Iason looked down over the ledge knowing that Riki was just one floor below him. Even now might be pacing on the balcony as he had done here so many times. A sudden desire to vault down yo the balcony below and swing inward just yo see of Riki was there. Even if he wasn't. To capture a glimpse of him moving through the apartment. He knew it could be done. The furniture rushed out seeing the deep red of the wine spilt rushing to clean it as Iason seriously considered his options. Then realized how foolhardly it would be as the droid would probably see this as a threat to Riki. Grabbing the cloth from the furniture he wipes his palm and went to the bathroom to pull out a piece of embedded glass. He looked up and stared at himself in the mirror. No longer did he wear the serene cold expression of Jupiters favorite son. His hair was mussed. Even he saw his conte enhance was changed just thinking of Riki. A certain wild uncontrolled look. He put his hand out to the glass. He realized he liked it. He did not look bored. Cold or distant. His carefully maintained mask had slipped and it felt good. His eyes met the furnitures as it entered the room and his mask snapped back in place. Ready my bath and bring me another glass of wine to the bath. I will fine later. |
Shir4Chii chapter 4 . 1/26/2017 I so hope for that you will continue this after so long. This is so good and i want to know how it will turn out. |
RavenWhiteMoi chapter 4 . 8/4/2015 ah... will you update this? it's very good. i'm curious, what agreement do Iason and Jupiter agreed on? |
Black Kitty77 chapter 4 . 7/28/2015 this is amazing...your story is really having an impact on me and i would love to read more so please update, i can not wait any more! i was literally so absorbed in the story that i did not even realize how much time passed! thank you for giving me the pleasure to read something like this and do update more! i will be waiting! |
Black Kitty77 chapter 1 . 7/28/2015 OMG...I am stunned...MORE! |
Prexkie chapter 4 . 7/26/2015 When will you update? Cause I love your story. And I fyou have a wattpad account, I will surely follow you. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2015 cool stuff thumbs up |
Soulhearts chapter 4 . 12/17/2014 Um, hello… I was wondering if you might continue this? I'm totally in love with it because it's such a great idea but it's a pity you haven't written any for two years… I do hope you'll continue it. Much Love, Soulhearts |