| Reviews for Unlikely Hero |
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   ChibiTacoLord chapter 2 . 2/14/2017 I like your story but it has one flaw... Lucario is not a psychic type, Lucario is a fighting and steel type. |
| Ayuki Karpy chapter 10 . 2/18/2012 I found this to be...AWESOME! I love it. Though I really wish Young Link and Roy were back in Brawl! Oh well! :3! |
| a chapter 10 . 10/25/2008 why diidy he is dks neohew and he is one of the five best characters |
| twilitprincess chapter 10 . 8/4/2008 This was a great story! Ness was my favorite, he's SO cute X3. Although it seemed like you gave him Lucas's personality...Ness seems more carefree and brave, with a smile almost always on his face. I actually thought the title "Unlikely Hero" suited Ness more than Donkey Kong in this. Good job anyways! I'm glad there's no sequel, because sometimes sequel's can ruin great stories, ya know? :P Keep up the good work! |
| Lucy chapter 10 . 8/4/2008 This was so amazing. I think a sequel with Peach, Diddy and Yoshi would actually be really cool! I give a 10/10! |
| master pokemon chapter 9 . 7/31/2008 is that the end or do certain people get to come back for brawl who really belong |
| master pokemon chapter 8 . 7/28/2008 Well um if it wasn't gannondorf it would usually be mewtwo but that was a great chapter |
| Pyropig93 chapter 3 . 7/12/2008 So, Ganondorf was just a pawn. Who is the real "boss," and why is he using former smashers? Is he a former smasher himself? |
| Pyropig93 chapter 2 . 7/12/2008 I wasn't expecting DK to be left behind, but I like the idea. He's not very major in any story, so this could be his star role. |
| Pyropig93 chapter 1 . 7/12/2008 Good story, although now it has a contadiction with players leaving that are still in Brawl, but I haven't read the rest of your story so I don't know if you solve the problem or not. Keep it up! |
| the Leander chapter 6 . 6/25/2008 Wonderful story you've got here. :3 Your grammar and writing skills are definitely above average, and I am absolutely in love with the fact that Ness is an important character. . I can't wait to see what happens next; I'm very curious about how this situation will work out. Keep up the good writing. |
| many form man chapter 6 . 6/21/2008 Damn it, Ganon! So, I can't see how good will win here... |
| Dark Kyotoa chapter 5 . 4/19/2008 I love this story! I love the suprise in the latest chapter. The three have good acting skills! I wish Donkley Kong wasn't caught by the mind-control device though. Poor Kong and Ness... |
| many form man chapter 5 . 4/19/2008 Well, sucks to be Ness. Can't wait to see how this turns out. |
| Dark Kyotoa chapter 4 . 4/2/2008 I really like this. . Chapter four is my favorite to date. :) |
