So you had Haku manage three Jutsu at the same time. Using the Ice Mirror, creating water, and freezing it solid? Shit writing there.

Kakashi was slowed down by anything less than 4 inches of ice? Again shit writing.

Naruto suffering chakra poisoning in 0 tails mode? Shit writing.

You should apologize for this idiocy.

I do hope you plan to continue writing this story.

first team. danzou's root cleaning team (cleaning team basicly spoofs down at increadible rate and remove any and all evidence from a crime scene, clean teams are not fighters. thus they got their asses kicked.)

uzuki anbu teamleader is awesome:D (only 2 purple haired people in konoha, and only one uses a sword.)

it was a very good chapter in a very good story. please make an update son.

this is an awesome story, wish you didn't stop it after 4 chapters though

Nice hope you update soon.

Greatness please update soon.

Nice again hope you update soon.

Very interesting hope you keep up the good work.

The story has come along nicely in storytelling and execution. It has great deal of potential now, especially with the amount of divergence to canon. It would be appreciated if you can leave a date for when you will update your story on your profile the next time you update your profile. Once again, nice story and hope you update fairly soon.

A rather thorough derailing of canon events, isn't it? Unfortunately, not my cup of tea. A dead Kakashi (who went out in a lame way; he deserved better than that...), a maimed Sakura, and a cannibalistic Naruto? Good God...this should have been listed a Horror/Drama instead of Drama/Friendship.

so far its pretty good,you have a twisted sense of humor in it, lol i like that, keep up the good work

hahaha, so funny how naruto bunshin died; nice explosion - (the arsonist in me is happy). Just as expected naruto absorbed haku abilities but did he absorb the sharingan (i hope not, naruto sharingan is too used)

O-O, Sakura Inner self is free and crazy (or PSM') and Naruto is becoming a sadist too, maybe their next Jounin sensei should be Anko (-). Hmm, so Sasuke isn't gay, well at lest sakura has hope to get in his bed voluntarily (one of the few occasions in which sakura has slept with sasuke is when she has violated him when he is slept or inconciente).

another great chapter, the bird kage bunshin was really funny

amazing, i really liked this story. I didn't expected for zabuza to cut sakura hand or to kill kakashi but i always thinked that zabuza should had killed him, but sakura hand was a piece of art; naruto eating them was another great bonus. Please continue with your good job.