Wow, is this your first Squiffie? It's pretty good! And they were all in-character, too. You did a great job!

HAHAHAHA! This is so funny! I was in the middle of reading it and I got thirsty, so on my way to the kitchen, I almost died laughing and almost fell to the floor from laughing. Awesome! 10/10!

Oh geez this is hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing!

Great Job!

Just wanted to say that there are a few errors in grammar and mechanics and I think you overdid it with the elipses, but other than that the story was great!

hahahha, what a funny story!

i loved it ]

Lot'sa room here for a sequel.

btw, sometimes you misuse the('). Still, really cute.

Evil Chocobos, huh? I would believe that! : )

I didn't know there was a way to torture a belt into submission, but if anyone can figure out one, it's Yuffie!

"Let's-see-how-long-it-will-take-to-burn-holes-into-her-face-with-just-my-eyes glares." that sounds really intense. Especially coming from Leon!

"Oh crapper doodles" I like that phrase. I think I might use it some time... : )

'Sexy as heck yes, but even crueler than Aerith while she's defending the color pink.' I love it!

studded belt of awesomeness, studded belt of glory, that belt likes to change jobs, doesn't it? : P

Aw... that was so mean of Squallie! And all just to get his stupid belt back! But that's why I love him! : )

I absolutely LOVED this! Great job with the personalities and everything! You got it all in character really well. Amazing job over all!

I loved this so much! Good job!

Very nice! I've never read a Squall/Yuffie before, and this has probably put me on terms that it's a pretty good pairing. Though I personally don't think Squall's right for anyone.

But in all seriousness, it was slightly difficult to read your fic. A few misplaced commas, or places where periods/commas should have been, and a spelling error here or there. But for the most part, I enjoyed reading this story.

~Kozga Nitt