Who is this Ryo anyway..XP

Yes I still love the cycle..XD

Okay, so I'm in love with them, oh so in love with this, on again, off again relationship..XD

i'm glad it wasn't a oneshot

i really enjoyed reading this

Nice fic

*whistles*

The plot is good although too short for my taste.

But I like your plots and manner of writing so I'll change my views on short stories. Generally, I find short stories, less than 5k words, lacking of depth, emotion, and some other things. But you've disproved me. So, good luck and more power. By the way, it would help if you place symbols/marks denoting a change of scene to avoid confusions...

This is very good! This is like the junction of the most important moments of their lives! I liked it very much! Good job!

Short, but great plot and very well written! Very nice!

Wow, fascinating chapter. I'll admit that I was confused by the beginning but I think that just made the story more interesting. You have a very unique style. I loved it.

Wow very interesting, but a little confusing

wow this was very well written but i found it slightly confusing with the jumping around from scene to scene. How did Ryo suddenly come back to life? Why did Kaoru kiss Ryo? was it a goodbye kiss or does she really still love him? anyway the first chapter was very good, i liked the ending where she has been brought to him as a present

ouh! this was very good! i lyked it alot!

I honestly didn't understand a thing that was going on. The time period didn't make sense to me - it just kept switching from one scene to another and I didn't understand the gem part until you mentioned what it was you were trying to get out there in the first place.

Your writing is really good though and a lot of the lines are original. I can almost see this as a play. :)

Huh?

A gem? Is this Rurouni Kenshin or Inuyasha? And shouldn't the lead female character be named Tomoe and not Kaoru if she's got a lost love?

I liked the story but it was very confusing. Is it part of a larger story? If so, you should change the names of the characters to all original names, get yourself a literary agent and start looking for a publisher. It really is that good.

"He will not watch someone he loves die in his arms, and if he never speaks those words it's not real and he doesn't care for her at all..."

Heartbreakingly effective, the way they and you as the author, danced around the central issue by using phrases like 'three little words' instead of just writing out those words. The emotion in both chapters was strong, angsty and gripping. However, the background information needed to process the plot was missing which made the story both enjoyable to read, yet ultimately unsatisfying.

Aw, glad i came across this fic. Battousai and Kaoru forever!

-Brenu

I love this very much. It just holds a few typos and that is it. It was so sweet. I mostly liked how you kept the characters in character and at the same time you managed to bring a mood to your fic and that might have been the reason why it caught my attention.

Anyway, I loved the plot! Keep writing.

-Brenu