wow another beatiful and fantastic darkish fanfiction. I really love how Yazoo seems to be mild and gentle from character again, sure with an overall evil/bad/dangerous thought in mind but in a gentle ,non violent way written. In fantasy it is erotic to imagine but ony in fantasy I am sure.
thank you for sharing!

"It was more enjoyable to take in the fear, the pain – and, something which he prided himself on, an occasional humiliating cry of orgasm."

For some reason I read that three times... just thinking about the whole situation...

It was really quite interesting...

And then...

"You like to mindfuck,"

Yep!

That WAS the perfect way to describe it.

I loved this. Was well rounded and ... just... right.

I wish there was more. D

xx

Wow, this is pretty amazing. Even though Yazoo is barly in the movie you still wrote about his POV in a way that didn't make him seem OOC so good job.

Another great fic! I absolutely love how you make Yazoo so twisted! :D

My God. You..you amaze me.

At first, I though the AxelDisneyPrincess One shots you wrote were as could as your writing would get. But, no.

While scanning your profile, I happen upon this gem. Beautiful, creepy, yes, but beautiful. I can really see Yazoo thinking and reacting in the ways you wrote. He's just that kind of creep, hah!

I can only hope to write things as wonderful as you one day!

Will you marry me?

Just kidding...

But seriously, I love this little story and I really enjoyed the characterizations. I hope to see more from you!

-stalks back from LJ XD -

I like this very much _ Creepy little characterization thing it is. I think you captured the differences and disconnection from humanity rather well. :-)

Creepy... The difference between Loz and Yazoo here makes sense with their characters, I think. Btw, you're missing a word here: 'hold them tight until gave in'. Also, at the end 'creeped' should be 'crept'.

wow.. so creepy

Oh wow. That gave me good chills. ;) It was freakin awesome to be honest. Good job.

Wow...O.O *is creeped out* Scary much? Fantastic writing! I love Yazoo's characterization! Poor boy never had much of a chance to develop during VII:AC.

Oh, I love darkness. Its quite too seductive for a narrative about rape, hehXD Very nice work:)