Wow. Just... wow. That was amazing.

OMfreakin'Gosh, this was beautiful... and really really angsty.

Nice angst in the middle. :) I think the end was my favorite part though. (and maybe the best part. )

Impressive, impressive! One of the best DGM fics I've read so far. Will there be more?

that fic was so cute, I really enjoyed reading it!

kanlina is one of my fav pairing in dgm

This. Is. Awesome. You are probably one of the best fanfic writers I have ever seen! Their emotions and personalities are displayed so well in this fic!

Whoah, this is intense and beautiful. Not only is the idea brilliant, but your insight into the character's emotions is so deep! The reader really sees a new side of all the characters, epsecially Linali and Tykki. And I love how Kanda is able to understand Linali, it really makes everything all the more heartwrenching. Haunting.

ooh

touching

i liked it!

Have I already written a comment? I don't know, because I've read this story again and again.

I have tears in my eyes and I had cried at certainly lines.

It's a oppresive feeling to read this, because you've described Linali's and Kanda's feelings (Rabi's as well) really good.

Sometimes I grew sick -like Kanda-, because of your good description.

But at the end, all bad feelings had fallen off me, when Linali cried (since I cried a little bit myself). I hope you write more like this, since you're really good at it

And, please, forgive me vV

My English isn't that good...

One word to describe your story?

BRILLIANT _

This was absolutely beautiful.

I rarely enter DGM fandom, because let's face it, there are A LOT of bad!fic around here.

But this isn't one of them.

You're writing style is beautiful and simple. You don't overdo the piece with floaty words and whatnot, as they take away attention from the actual plotline. I've read fics like that, and while I can't actually critic them, I can't relate to the fic as much.

You had me completely hooked on this. Linali's story and how she described Tyki was beautiful, and by the end of it, I was almost in love with him too. Kanda's loyalty was endearing, and Linali's lack of shame was completely unexpected, which gave this fic a pleasant little twist.

Another reason I don't venture that much into DGM fandom is because there is a lack of variety when it comes to het-pairings. 90percent of them are Linali/someone, Linali always being written the same, as the sweet bubbly happy girl everybody loves, and there's only so much that I can read about one character without getting fed up, especially if I'm not her biggest fan in the first place. But you illustrated her in a completely different light, all the while making her in character, which interested me, intruiged me, captivated me and so much more. The plot is original, the emotions are portrayed beautifully, and I don't usually review (a bad habit of mine), as I'm so bad at it and tend to ramble on and on as I am doing right now, but this was truly wonderful.

Thank you, so much for writing this. Truly a breath of fresh air.

No matter how many times I read this, it's still amazing. Love.

Hmm... odd pairing but you pulled it off with Kanda's explanation. Muy bien! Me gusta!

BAM *falls onto floor* Wow. That's such a good fic. I don't ship those ships, but still, VERY well written. Lenalee's madness was portrayed excellently. I can imagine...*nods*

I started reading this just as a passing fancy, because I was bored...but Its really good! Your writting style is very good, I really enjoyed it!

This was such a crisp and refreshing oneshot - especially from a fandom where trash reigns - and I seriously have to thank you for writing and posting this.