whaa D: so much awesomeness

..Naruto from being a scarred boxer to a scarred druggie! How could you! with a needle! So is he some creature?

Wrong spellings and grammar. They're nothing compared to a good plot and summary and lemons. Let's not forget the lemons *nods they are very important to make the story catchy. Specially if its a slash/yaoi story. Yeah!

I love boxing so im kinda dissappointed. But the little lemon made me happy so..

Oh yeah..now we're getting somewhere. Lol yeah scars are so hot. Specially the ones on the chest. Yeah *drools oh gawd im a pervert! Lol

Muscular Naruto and a highschooler Sasuke..bed..*drools..doing 20 questions..*yeah totally arousi-..eh? What! Lol

Love the summary! catchy (_)v ooh..coffee spillage does the mood lol XD

Ok, no offence man, and I have no idea how different you are currently to this story but, you need to learn how to spell and use punctuation properly, I couldn't even read more than half way through this chapter (which is a dissapointment because it sounds like it would be a good story)

Story is pretty good so far but the major flaw in grammar is the difference between "know" and "no". Learn the difference and it will be much better.

You need a beta. You have parts missing in your sentences so that it makes it confusing to read. Words spelt horribly wrong. Sentences that run into another that should be seperated. Your punctuation is off too. Other than that I think this story will be interesting and have a good plot. I look forward to reading more though.

i liked this story their were a lot of grammar mistakes that kind of distracted me from the story but as soon as you get someone to beta it it'll be great ]

a prety good story so far. a little hard to follow. you should geta grammar and spelling was a little off at times.

is naruto the uke(under) and sasuke the seme(top) or is it the other way around?

nice fic

alot less crazy of a ending doesnt leave you wondering'

WTF!' liked