Reviews for Ascending Destiny
punkydo410 chapter 19 . 2/23/2013
Omg. I really loved this story, but was that really the end cuz if it was im really kinda upset! I really want to know what happens next. Please! Anyway, i think it was written very very well and i almost thought it was written by a selling author, know what i mean? There are a few things i didnt really get like what exactly is a veela, and that kind of stuff.
fortunecookiesthesecond chapter 8 . 2/17/2009
Hi,

I have a question, when you referred to Karkaroff as 'crucified' did you mean put under the cruciatus curse, or as in strung up on a cross as was done to christians in ancient rome.

Thanks,

If you respond, do so at .

Thank You!

fortunecookiesthesecond

P.S. I do so love your story!
anige chapter 19 . 3/23/2004
oh you have to finish this story! it's so good, the story line and plot is jsut mind boggeling it's awesome! i noticed it's been like a year sense you undated, but god, i'd pay you to finish it. Everything is left so undone! it's not fair! *going to go insane dwelling on it* but this is a truly kick ass story, from the pairings (even though i'm not overly-fond of threesomes-but you make it work) to the plot! keep going, please!
tangledhair chapter 19 . 1/8/2004
It's been over a year since you updated, so I'm taking it that you're not going to be finishing Ascending Destiny. poo.
But I have quite enjoyed it over the past week or so. I really liked the way you pulled different stories together under one plot. I also like that little funny things you put in from time to time. My favorites were Hermione going nuts in the potions laboratory, Dumbledore figuring out a key to the Every Flavor Beans, and the idea of a disco party at Hogwarts. All three made me laugh out loud.
I also thought you did well with the slash content, having the teens act like really horny teens, rather than just flowery soulmate lovers. And Seamus was hilarious.
It took me awhile to get used to the way you write dialogue, especially since the menacing background characters didn't always have names, but I think the thought and ideas you put into the story more than made up for that.
I guess now that I've finished this one, I should go to your author page and see if you have any more stories up.
Write on.
CrawBrad chapter 19 . 1/5/2004
I am ever so sad now. This is an amazing story, but seeing how it has been two years since you updated, I guess it will go unfinished. I truly hope that you do decied to write more. ~Brad
tangledhair chapter 5 . 12/28/2003
Brilliant about the book for Hermione from Rowena Ravenclaw. I can't wait to find out how it fits in!
Phalanx Dragon chapter 19 . 12/27/2003
Great story... It's coming along very well and I can't wait for you to get the next chapter up. Really, you deserve more credit that you get, I've seen stories half as good as this with twice as many reviews. But you know how some people are... a little bit of adorable slash (ok alot) and they run screaming *sigh* *snickers* in the beginning when Harry, Seamus, and Draco first got together I kept imagining how Sirius would break to Harry that he's with Remus...
Sirius: Harry... I'm gay
Harry: Me too!
Sirius: umm, I have a boyfriend...
Harry: I have two!
*cackle* wouldn't it be great? lol, anyway, I love where this is going. The only thing I can think to critisize is the constant change in POVs... it gets a bit confusing after a while, but I can see why you made it like that. I love the plot, I love the ships (although the Severus/Fleur caught me off guard... still not too sure about that one), and I love the story -_ Keep up the good work and keep on writing! ~Phalanx
chaser1 chapter 9 . 5/1/2003
Like it.
Jen chapter 19 . 2/25/2003
Hey. I just found your stories and I love this one. Haven't read the others yet. Please keep going. I really want to know what happens. It's gonna bug me til you finish. "Puppy Dog Eyes" "Pouting" and I'll even give you chocolate covered whoever.
canceria chapter 8 . 12/22/2002
hey go u!

ur making good use of all those less well known supporting characters - neville being a good one; if he really was that crap at magic, why the hell was he admitted! there's lots of griffindor action going on - what's up with the other houses?

eh and what the hell is wrong with fudge?

i guess i'll either find out later as i keep reading
canceria chapter 2 . 12/22/2002
it's a bit late for a reveiw

but i saw this story ages ago, just the first 2 chapters mind u

and it had me intrigued and stuck in my head

anyway, i lost track of it before it went any further than the 2 chaps i'd read

but scouring backwards for a while recently, i finally stumbled across it - never quite forgot it so am happily reading now
AyanaIbiralian chapter 19 . 12/4/2002
Hey! I just finished reading all that you have written for this story thus far, and I must say that it is really very interesting.

I hope that you will continue it when you get the chance to.

I have to apologise...I am one of those people that normally just reads the story and doesn't review, but hey, since you've asked people to review...I thought why not?

The idea of all of the characters breaking apart from each other was actually quite nifty. I am definitely enjoying this story, and I hope that you will continue it soon.
Myr chapter 19 . 11/26/2002
great... now I'm all caught up... where's the resT?
Myr chapter 18 . 11/26/2002
finally got to read this chapter. nice. off to the next one.
Corialis chapter 19 . 10/29/2002
Oh! Updates! And this has taken you how long, exactly?

...I thought so.

*wince**cringe* You got reviews from me in my insane, bad grammar fangirl phase. Yep, IceFire here, using new account because FFN seems to hate my old one. But hey, if my reviews helped convince you to keep on going, they must be good for something! The long wait was fine - I completely understand how you felt about not even being able to look at HP fic, and as long as you finish this eventually I'll be a nice, happy little fangirl!

Actual review? Still love it. Still think Mrs. Figg is completely awesome. And still in love with the D/H/S triangle, despite the fact that I just know that Draco's going to end up being mopey and screwing something up. You've got a few things that need some work (events seem to be all jumbled together and it gets a bit confusing), but nothing a good beta couldn't fix.

And the whole board game thing, with the characters as pawns, is definitely beginning to remind me of Discworld - which is in no way a bad thing!

If you still want a beta, btw, I would be more than happy to volunteer. E-mail me () if you're still looking for someone to squee madly over new chapters while ripping them to pieces at the same time. I've been told I'm a good beta, and one of the people I read for seems to have stopped writing entirely...

Okay, enough rambling on my part. Keep writing! 300 readers can't be wrong! And hey, some people are still reviewing. Don't forget about us, we deserve to figure out the rest of what's going on!
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