Aw! Why'd Athrun have to be so mean! lol keep writing:)

Zala - cool

Zala w/ toothpick - uncool

I do wonder why Athrun's such a jerk... Very interesting chapter one, please update soon )

Great start! I'll be watching from the shadows...

Here's an OC:

Name: Tarik Lam

Age: 18

Hair: short black

Eyes: dark blue

Personality: cold and calculating like a mercenary

Likes: hacking, milsim (and therefore weapons strategy), earl grey tea

Dislikes: screaming fangirls, health drinks, school (but he still goes)

He probably won't be a main character unless you're planning on creating a war zone. lol If he's a fanboy, he'd be the stalker type.

Sorry, no school name...

Good luck.