i hope this story continues

this is beautiful please update soon

write more please and it really good. but where in the seven layer's of hell is sesshomaru.

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

I want to see Sesshomaru in this.

interesting story. Found some grammar issues, and I think that it's spelt reiki rather than reiyouki, but that's just my opinion. It could be something different, I dunno.

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

When will Sesshomaru appear? Anyway Shadow Raptors (Velociraptor/Utahraptor) should be the 1st strongest creatures of light and Kagome could of gotten experimented on at age 8-9 with Shadow Raptor DNA that was injected into her, worked for no one else only her (others it either cancelled the DNA or killed the person), which only shows when she gets pissed off.

I'm sorry to hear (or more like read) that you have difficulties to continue this story. i hope you will continue because me, I love it!

I also like the not weak kagome. She can defend herself, yeah )!

I hope sesshomaru will make his apparition. I'm a big fan of him

come you have to find the streagth to contuin

this is good you have a good starting point

can you please add more chapter

Great story! Can't wait for the next update! I wish I could have a creature of light! LOL

So then Kagome is the first creature right?

That is so funny, please update, I really want to know what happens to them, especially Koga!

Can't wait!

please update soon. i am interested to find out what happens next.

I'm not big on reading anime fanfiction usually because it's so crappy, but I was pleasantly surprised upon reading this. Nice work.