Buena historia. Aunque complicado el tema de los sellos de poder.

Good story, bad review.

-Toebang

There are no characters here. Similarly, a chain of events does not a story make.

Sarutobi the third god of shinobi shows his head. been an age since i read a fic where he earned that moniker

I am confused. Is Shikamaru and Naruto's idea to wipe out the ninja and samurai? Doesn't he realize regular people are just as shitty?

Does Naruto know who his parents are yet?

I am curious about Naruto's parents identity being known and does Naruto or team 7 know yet. Did Naruto ever learn sealing ?

It looks like Naruto has caught up to his teammates and while there are some things I question I am really enjoying this story and the early badassness of the trio. You have turned this into what the strongest of the ninja villages should have been.

You have done much but Naruto has nothing more than speed, stupidity and a fire jutsu that Sasuke can use better but Sasuke already has a mature sharingan, speed and ninjutsu. Sakura is already better and becoming a possible mednin prodigy. If you are advancing the other two then Naruto needs something other than the Kyubi which isn't something that can be relied on for every fight where he feels cornered plus no knowledge or training on how to use or control it.

I am hoping that Naruto at least learns the shadow clone jutsu. With Sasuke already having his sharingan Naruto needs something.

I would imagine ninjutsu isn't supposed to be allowed in an academy spar.

Too much on the politics side of things, team 7 became background characters, the next time you see them they’re all powered up, while the readers would much prefer to read how they done it not this boring political games that should be done in the background instead.

Damn nigga didn't even update like he said smh

just spent the night with your story and it was phenomenal.

you have a gift man, can't wait to see what's in the next chapter

What a story! I cant wait to read the conclusion!