That was good!

Sweet

i cried because it was so sad but so cute!

I Never Meant To Hurt You

I woke from my 7 month long acoma,

I wanted no one,

Not even him to come into the room.

For days it had been rainning,

And everyone of them i counted,

Counted the drops i saw.

157, 158...

Everyone kept asking to see me,

But i would refuse to let anyone see me,

See me like this.

I just started to count again,

But i heard the door open,

And i lnew it wasn't Mr. Unohana.

It was him...

He tried to talk to me,

But i refused,

And told him i didn't need him...

Anymore...

I broke his heart,

And put him into shoke,

Which hurt a lot because he released all of his reiatsu.

When i finally realizied what i've done,

I started to crawl towards him,

And once i got close enough i hugged him.

He tried to get away,

But wasn't strong enough because he let out so much energy.

I then gave in,

And finally told him,

"I want you and i love you...Toshiro Hitsugaya."

"I love you too Momo."

-by momo21

hey yes i just wrote it...in 5 minutes i think that's a record, but it was soo cute i had to write something bout it. oh and if you haven't guessed well i do this for everyone...that finish a story...good..wait i mean great story. hmm...if i posted all of my peoms i wrote in note books and for reviews then i would have about 300 poems on here...too many to read so i said forget it! this poem is yours because it's bout your story and i would be stealing. soo umm... do whatever you want with it...except say you wrote it and sell it to someone...or something that will make me look bad. sorry i do come with rules but other wize you can print it out and show people what you got in a review...i don't care except what i said in the last sentnce!

love your stories..g2g it's 11pm and i'm getting tired

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omg most adorable thing ever!

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lol it was very good, nice job

This was so cute!

Sweet! Loved it, so aweosme and awesomer!

aw! it was pretty sad but cute at the same time!great job!

Wow! Awesome! Keep up the good work! :D:D:D

Kawaii! Love it, love it, lovey it! You did a great job! Keep up the awesome woork!:D

xoxo MimiMichi

awesome!

Aw! How cute! Hitsugaya swearing seemed OOC but it fit in well with the tone of the story. Very nice work! So cute! I really liked how angry he got.

But didn't he shatter the window with his reiatsu? Why would he put her back in a bed, covered in glass, when the rain that was originally hitting the window was getting Hinamori wet - she'd get sick!

This one-shot was awesome! I really loved it!

Oh, I loved this! It made me cry inside!

~aprilsierra

very good! the beginning was a bit sad, but the end definitely made up for it with all the fluff...

another great piece of work by you! and thanks for taking the time for the H.H.F.M.

anyways good job! : )