really great story love it and can't wait to read more but this was very confusing and im lost

YAY

i'm kind of confused. i haven't read the story in awhile, so do u think u can fill me in again about whats happening? please?

Oh wow! That was intense. Loved it! Thanks for updating!

Please update soon!

Thanks.

umm it was okay i guess i mean some things probably wouldnt happen but it was okay

that's great, I'm relieved! Hope to see a new chapter soon, I'm looking forward to it!

yours, raviell

YAY your not gonna sto writing thast its we are gonna throw a wonderful tea party for you all YAY *i got the wonder ful tea party from potc* lol

Huh...I would love to take this story over, but I really can't. I'm writing five stories currently and can't start another one right now...school, work...all those things.

Anyway, I hope you can find someone, who takes this story and continues it appropriately...

yours, raviell

OMG i would take over for you but im much the same i like will get bored of it after leik 2hours lol erm if ya liek ill search around (i dont like my luck) but yeah one perosn i can Recomend is iluvcarlise she might be able to finfish itoff for ya.

Way too short. But it was good. Cannot wait for an update.

I followed the link from something you posted (I'm assuming it was you; it may be one of your fans) on the IMDb Message Board for Inkheart, and I must say, I'm glad I did.

This story is amazingly well-written! I don't usually read Twilight fics because they tend to ruin the story for me, but this one doesn't. It's a great plotline so far, and I think you're doing a great job depicting Bella. I'd read more, but I need to go. Keep up the good work!

yey! ExB! Whats going on with jacob? please update soon. :)

oh...but why did he put her down in the first place?