| Reviews for kage shinobi |
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   Soul knight sage chapter 3 . 11/3/2009 I like the originality of this one and i be looking forward to reading more, but for now i need sleep |
| Pride-comes-before-the-fall chapter 3 . 10/21/2009 lolz my friend said the exact same thing: she had a edency to faint quite a lot and waz talkin away and suddnly says "bi the way im gonna faint now kay?" and just fained it waz soo funny:D no i dont take pleasure in pplz pain its a medical thing and my friends and i got use to it and she just made jokes ps. im refering this in the past tense not cause she died or ny thing she recovered and dosnt faint ny more... well not as much any wayz :D |
| moonangel511 chapter 3 . 10/5/2009 I think the whole thing with Sakura and Sasuke is really cool and goes with the story. I kind of feel bad for Sakura as her mom is a total bitch. Anyways really great story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. Later. |
| Rose Tiger chapter 3 . 10/4/2009 I like where this is going. Keep going. |
| Rose Tiger chapter 1 . 10/4/2009 You spelled "Jiraiya," "Konoha," and "Danzo" wrong. |
| VFSNAKE chapter 3 . 10/4/2009 YAY! That was awesome! Naruto killed Mizuki and all is right with the world now that the Haruno family has been cleaned up. Write more ASAP! |
| Gravity The Wizard chapter 2 . 7/12/2009 Cool Start! I hope you decide to continue the story into the future. |
| VFSNAKE chapter 2 . 7/12/2009 Nice chapter. I miss this. Though I wish Naruto wasn't so forgiving of Konoha all the time. Could you make so he tolerates them, but if he gets pissed off, he can hurt them, and maybe kill one for trying to hurt Hinata? Just saying. Write more ASAP! |
| VFSNAKE chapter 1 . 3/20/2008 Well this certianly is an interesting story so far. As for being your beta I say sure! Go right ahead. Write more ASAP! |
| Era-chan chapter 1 . 1/27/2008 An interesting concept. I would like to read more of this story to find out how you will tie everything together. Some questions, though: What are you going to do to Tsunade and Jiraiya? What about Orochimaru? (I do hope that the perpetrator for the genjutsu will be someone else other than Orochimaru due to the cliche of it becoming overused.) Are you going to bring some flashbacks of Ryuu's past? Are you going to slowly reveal the two Avatars and is there a "but" linked to becoming an Avatar? Just some random questions I hope you think over. Can't wait to read more! |
| Ryuujin96 chapter 1 . 1/26/2008 I like it, though I wonder why no one has reviewed yet because it looks like its going to interesting. |
