God, this fanfic is everything lol... loved it

Oh that was previous. Gosh 3

I enjoyed reading your story from start to finish. I really like finding ones that are complete to read. I hate finding a real good story and it is never finished. I am so glad I found yours. It was a fun read. You did well with the English as well. I liked how you ended the story too. I still feel that Wolfram would take Yuri's last name and not his. As Yuri is the Maou, after all.
Thanks for such an enjoyable read and keep up the great work.

Lol they didnt have they first night yet and they fight already.. Poor Yuuri.. XD ehm i love Wolfram Shibuya the most so just give it up, Wolfie chan.. ;-)

me gusto tu fics es algo muy realista y creo que se acopla un poco mas con la historia del anime, en otros e notado que pasa muy rapido y dudo que yuuri con inocente que es acepte que quiere a wolfram, esta muy bueno el fic continua asi

-applauds- not to angsty, not to boringly descriptive, not to overly twisted.

You've written a story that's calming and made the reader feel in love, and not pressured by too much angst some of the story had. The whole time I read it, I was smiling. There was no heavy emotional surge that I want to ripped off any characters attitude, this is what I can call a "feel good" story, and its very hard to find one like this.

most of the well written story i've encountered too almost always made Wolfram acts like a slut, been raped brutally, been captured, bed somebody else, or just emotionally tortured soul, so un-Wolfram. Or Yuri being so dense, or hurt Wolfram continuously, or would tend to like other/s.

This is the first KKM Yuram story that I enjoyed reading without pressure, giving me a happy complete feeling after reading the epilogue. :)

Someone beats wolfram with magic? but isn't he the second most powerful magic user next to Maou? Hmmm... but then again this is a fic.

aww poor wolfram :(

i loved your story so much ,thank you for writing it

i frowned when yuri did something stupid and smiled when wolfram proved his point

thanks for the lovely story _~

make more sasu naru

Well, that was cute.

I have some advice, which I offer only because I think you're on the edge of being a /really/ great author, rather than just a good one. (In fact, since this was written over a year ago, maybe you've already gotten better, but I'll say my thoughts anyways.)

First of all, be just a little more careful with grammar and spelling. This story was a lot better than some, but a few typos or awkwardly worded sentences detracted from the story sometimes. (Along with that whole 'beetred' thing. Where /did/ you get the idea that was one word?)

Second, putting in just a little more introspection during the makeout scenes would be good. Even better, if you can manage it, show as much emotion as you can through their actions. And I don't mean just the kissing - you did that very well, but it would have been perfect if you'd thrown in Wolfram smiling a lot (because Wolfram has the cutest smile ever), or Yuuri being super-nervous, or Wolfram being a snarky bastard even in the middle of kissing Yuuri, because he totally would.

Um, that turned into more of a rant than I wanted it to. Anyways, my point really is that I think you're good and you /could/ be amazing with just a few little tweaks.

And I really enjoyed this story. Totally made my night. Cya~

'Beet red' is not one word. That's seriously bothering me.

Other than that, though, the plot seems a little bit contrived, but since a lot of things in KKM kind of reek of deus ex machina, it's not all that out of place. And it's adorable, which, in my book, justifies almost anything, no matter how cliche.

much better ending... hehehehe

Such a great story

I enjoyed a lot reading it

Thank you

Yuuram is an awesome couple

Hope that you will write another story about them

Your story made me grin! That's really the best feeling after reading someone's hard work. I really enjoyed this. There weren't as many errors in language as you led me to expect, and you wove a really nice, creative story. The only thing that threw me a little was when Wolfram starting acting more like Sasuke and less like himself somewhere in the middle, but I can imagine it's difficult to write both at the same time and not have them turn out similarly. And by the end, he was himself again.

I smiled and laughed throughout and I was thoroughly entertained, so I'd say this story was a success, even with your losing inspiration. :D Thanks for writing it.