Aww I just read Egregious Exile and now Little Pinon, it is class!XD Pls update!

I must admit you really go into depth of Amy and the emotional and physical abuse she's suffered at the hands of Anna and Cathrine.

Great work!x

Oh, great story. You so have to update D Please *puppy dog eyes* I can't wait to see what's in store for them!

SugarhogRose x

This chapter was in interesting one because after this chapter we really don’t know what Amy will face through out the stories, so for now the story has had more of a dramatic style. The story is in a shifting perspective in chapter 8 so the next chapters will introduce an interesting chronicle. I think after this chapter you could think of some awesome plot twists and action in which the bad guys are chasing Amy similar to movies like the Bourne Ultimatum, Run Lola Run (even though the storyline is different) or the double life of Veronique (another kinda different storyline), mixing Action thriller ideas can be a good one. It would be really interesting too see Amy being chased in a city all alone and by fitting in the best reactions by her can be a fine idea. For example she’s being chased and has to drive a car (even though she can’t) is something very cool. I always loved Car chase and escape themes in action.

The idea mentioned above can be one idea, you can try much stuff, by altering the story into a more Friendship and dramatic scene or you can mix both ideas up (Action and friendship). Or maybe you can improve the relationship between Amy and Sonic.

Overall the story is in a good position for now and now you have a chance to really show what Amy faces through out this story and let her face the challenges

I love this story. I also read your first one and i was blown away. PLz update.

Sonic needs to figure it out that Tails is just really concerned about Amy. Poor thing was really excited to hear that his friend spoke one word...but he did needed a good talk by Sonic...though interrupted in a funny kind of way. XD

A good chapter, I think. There were two things that stood out to me: finding out more about how Tails views the situation (slightly immaturely), and some more info on Sonic. Sonic is both a) more mature in many ways than I thought, which is interesting, and b) hates morning showers, which is the kind of on-the-side, non-plot oriented information that I like.

P.S. I apologize for not posting a review last chapter. The site wouldn't let me.

I actually read this chapter days ago but didn't write a review.

Amy sure is in a defensive mode, I guess through these two years she went through lot of emotional pain. It was surprising when she didn't even hug Sonic when Sonic wanted to hug her.

Great chapter, I also read chapter 7 both we're great.

OH MY GOSH! did amy shot or not piz do some more oh and my borther love your story piz finsh because i love it to

The tension of the huge cliffhanger! I hate it when that happens but more to keep guessing, right?

Sonic seems really determined to find Amy. He acts really calm, patient,and confident with his conversation with Anna. But, tend to mess up at some point -_-; He makes such a great inspector. Details and descriptions were amazing in this chapter. Congrats!

oh no :o please update soon! you've put me into suspence .. i think lol

great chapter! i wonder who this person is ? hm

o well x

Man! You're one updating machine! By far this was the best chapter, lot's of humor. I really enjoyed Sonic's dialog with Anna, Sonic sure was a novice. I really laughed my head off when Sonic called himself Inspector Sasser! ROTFL!

“That’s alright – the police should have been the ones to ask you that. You know, here they’re a bit amateurish,” Sonic said smugly.

I just loved that line, I'm still laughing to myself!

The View of Sonic you have given to me really does remind me of Sonic in the old days and the cartoon series known as The Adventures of Sonic The Hedgehog, thanks for bringing back the good old Sonic! I think Anna must be really hot in some way I don't know!

Great Work man! You're writing has improved through and through. You have brought the originality back to you get a 20 out of 10! And I guess you broke the record for fastest updater!

Another good chapter - again, what I liked best was the Sonic character you're building. He's confidant, but makes mistakes. I liked how he tried to play different parts, although that seemed a little intellectual for Sonic - but then, as I said, you're building you're own Sonic character.

Great read, I enjoy it very much, no flaws at all.

Pablo, Brad, and Winnie should deserve a medal for helping out Sonic and Tails. I guess friends have each other's backs as a statement!

Silly Sonic...Always a kid at heart. Nice little humor going on at the end of the chapter.

more more more more even my baby borther like it piz finsh