Ten years passed so this isn’t likely to get updated- but I gotta say this is pretty good!

Really good story, but desperately needs to be updated.

awesome. please please please update update update! don't forget this genius story after 6 years! i believe in this story having the potential, i do. but only you can update it:)

*grins and extends blades for inevitable combat*

*summons pinkamena and dean* *lends them to holy to help torture opal*

*grins and cleans blades for battle*

this'll be fun...although if butler gets salt rounds, he might be dangerous.

*grins demon smile*

Wow, this is so well written and the plot is really interesting! Loving this story!

This is an incredible story! It's a shame that you seemed to have abandoned it... I would love to read more!

This. Is. Freaking. AWESOME! :D :D :D :D you deserve a cookie! (::) :D

please write more it is really good and you should continue it. Please

Yes. This is good. I approve. Continue.

You want criticism? Here. Your clothes are too small, your too fat, get a life, get a job, stand up straighter, go to a nice college, brush your teeth for once in your life, and get out more.
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Jk, jk. I really like it.

Ahhhhhhh. Not complete. Nooooooooo