Woo, what a ride.

I love this fic. Angsty but with a happy ending, and the twist of Dinozzo Sr. Quite good.

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I love! That was great. :) I really enjoyed reading your story. So glad Tony didn't get hurt too badly! Brilliantly written, fun and enjoyable.

Great story!

Hahahahahaahhaha :D

This was written quite awhile ago and I have no idea if you will ever see this review...but...I wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this story! Thanks!

Great story!

I love your writing style and the way you captured everyone's voice, but especially Tony's.

Thanks for sharing.

Joanie.

Awesome story! I loved it! :D

Tony wanted to call it the 'snough', ingeniously mashing 'cough' and 'sneeze' together, but Abby was of the opinion that it sounded too dirty. Plus, she'd added brightly, snuffle was catchier. Tony knew better than to argue with Abby on anything other than movies. And thus the snuffle was created. HA! They would be doping something like this when bored.

"When we get Tony back, I don't care how much he complains. I'm gonna implant a GPS tracker in the back of his neck so he never gets lost again." So Abby.

Gibbs raised an eyebrow in frustration. "DiNozzo, you can barely stand, let alone fire a weapon. You're not going into a warehouse where there are unknown hostiles and who the hell knows what else. How are you gonna apprehend the suspect – sneeze on him?" Leave it to Tony to be sick have to stay in the car and then get kidnapped.

Anthony was used to several things. He was used to intimidating people with a single glance. He was used to being respected. And he was used to being obeyed. Gibbs was a man who defied all three. Go Gibbs you show Sr. He cant intimidate you. Its the other way around.

They were his family; Gibbs, Abby, McGee, Ducky and Ziva. He had his doubts that his father would even respond to whatever threat his captors had sent. But with Gibbs, there was no question. The team was more of a family to him than his biological one had ever been. At NCIS, he felt welcome, loved, appreciated. Even when he screwed up, Gibbs never made him feel like a failure. There was punishment, sure, but only when he deserved it. Forgiveness came easily. He felt cared for, for the first time in his life. Wanted. It wasn't something he'd give up willingly. Just keeping thinking that Tony. Gibbs is coming.

"I thought I would just drive my son's car." Anthony replied.

"Oh, no." Ziva and McGee reacted instantly, both spinning around and looking shocked at the mere ! be stupid or crazy. Tony doesn't let anyone drive his car.

He was reluctant to trust any federal agency, especially in light of the charges brought up against his brother, but he had no choice. He had to trust Agent Gibbs to get his son back, and hopefully keep the family out of trouble in the process. Gibbs had ordered his men to shoot to wound, not to kill. The FBI would get custody, and the men would sing like birds to cut a deal, he knew. That would no doubt include the family's involvement with the group. The FBI couldn't be trusted to keep that information quiet; they had more leaks than a sieve. The media, the public, everyone would find out, and he'd lose all of his customers. He couldn't let that happen. OMG! What an As* he care more about the family reputation than his son by saying/thinking that.

And in the end Gibbs is thee for Tony.

Just so you know, when you have a fever, you feel cold. Not hot. Your ambient body temperature is higher so normal room temperatures suddenly feel colder, so your body shivers to generate heat and raise your core temperature to the new ambient temp in your body. Therefore, you feel chilled. So if Tony feels hot and wants to rip his clothes off and dive into a pool...well I'm fine with that either way! XD

WOW! REALLY GOOD STORY. CAME ACROSS IT IN THE WHUMP SECTION CONCERNING TONY AND COULD NOT STOP READING IT! THANKS FOR WRITING AND POSTING IT!

Lovely story.

Great story. Loved your characterizations. Very nice writing.

I swear Tony has this sorta childlike faith in Gibbs, it would be so ... awe inspiring if someone were to have that much faith in me. This is a wonderful, well written fic. I love it