Reviews for As Darkness is Falling
lalo chapter 17 . 8/7/2012
great!
coby64 chapter 23 . 3/15/2012
Thank you for putting a NM EPOV on FanFic. I enjoed it.
coby64 chapter 8 . 3/14/2012
My favorite chapter so far. I so prefer hearing his thoughts instead of dialogue.
Lauren chapter 23 . 3/4/2012
That was amazing! The best New Moon epov ever! Please keep writing!
Lauren chapter 11 . 3/4/2012
Wow, that was sooooo good! I love your writing!
Lauren chapter 9 . 3/4/2012
Maybe I shouldn't have thought so, but that page was HILARIOUS! It was my favorite EPOV of New Moon. Thanks for writing!
MomoMouat97 chapter 10 . 1/5/2012
wef
ShannonM84 chapter 7 . 8/3/2010
WOW! You understand Edward and all the Cullen's better than any other I've read. You seem to really think about every detail and I love it! Thanks for doing this :))
AlexisKlainer chapter 12 . 7/2/2010
OMG come on Edward GET YOWL BUTT BACK TO BELLA!

lolz i cant help myself shouting at it :L:L

evern tho i have read it loadsa times (S.M one) and know the story

It awesome this version. love the attention to detail. and the little girl. What was her name? i REALLY wanna know :D

Thanks for posting such an interesting look into Edward's head

Thanks agen!

. xxx

p.s can you all please read my stories? thanks, need constructtive critism andone story cant continue wivout dat! thanks agen!
AlexisKlainer chapter 6 . 7/2/2010
Omg how could Edward DO this to himself! AND Bella!

I have OBV read New Moon like 10 times(OBV skipping to the bits wiv Bella and Edward on the like 3rd read)

And it an Awesome Story yu shud DEF do all the stories from Edward's POV. you are SO awesome at it!

Thanks for Writing and Posting this Story and yur others!

. xxx

p.s YUU AREEE EPICCC!
MONA chapter 23 . 5/4/2010
thank you so much for the NEW MOON EPOV you'r awesome XOOxxoXX
Lovely7896 chapter 22 . 10/2/2009
Omg! I read all of ur stories from chapter one-twenty two! U are such a good writer! U said all of Edwards pointof veiw perfectly! U sound like SM! U should keep writing, u should wirte as ur second fanfic, eclipse in Edwards point of veiw, and breaking dawn! I loved ur stories! There were three spelling mistakes I saw: in Close Call Aro was speaking and he said " I mean her no ham" it was suppose to be "harm", but thats okay I got! Then in Explanation Edward said " Bell blahh" it was suppose to say "Bella" but it's fine! Finally in Explanation edward says about the voturi " they count years the way u count days" u flipped it it's suppose to be " they count days the way u count years! U have to keep writing I was reading for ever! I couldn't put ur writing down! Thank u so much for writig hope u keep writing! Thanks! Twilghtlover7896
mehek chapter 23 . 9/24/2009
i loved ur story, it deserves more reviews. very gud story.
Blahabsbsh chapter 17 . 8/1/2009
He means no ham to her? I LIKE HAM!
Luv-X-Juliet chapter 23 . 5/22/2009
This story was great!

More description would be better, same with characterisation. I would have loved to see more indepth edward's thoughts and emotions in the writing. Some scenes did make me tear up, and with more desciptive language and effective techniques, i could have spilt some.

Overall a good piece, and i have finally satisfied my mind with a worthy piece of edward's POV.
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