| Reviews for Paper Rose and The Black Shadow |
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   Be Your Own Anchor1231 chapter 7 . 12/31/2010 This story is exciting and funny mixed together at the same time. WOW! I type alot. |
| kenokosan chapter 7 . 5/17/2010 cool |
| CaroAmy chapter 1 . 5/17/2010 Hello! I'd like to give you some suggestions. There were some typos here and there which you would quickly find and correct if you read over this chapter again. I'd recommend not using abbreviations such as OMG and actually spelling out the word/sentence, unless the character is actually sayin (and if she is disregard what I just said). Also, unless Kimmi's house is called "Beach House" you shouldn't capitalize the words. Sometimes you miss words in the middle of a sentence. For example " Anger rushing through her veins, though she no weapons...", this part of the sentence "though she no weapons" doesn't make sense, it feels like it's missing a word. Maybe you meant 'though she had no weapons'? There are also a few spelling mistakes here and there, but if you read through the chapter again I'm sure you'd be able to find them and correct them. Everyone makes little mistakes; I do all the time, so it's okay if you have a few mistakes and typos. I would just suggest reading over this chapter and correcting them. Then it would make the chapter even more pleasurable! Best of luck in your future chapters and stories! ~CaroAmy |
| Project Shadow chapter 6 . 3/25/2008 *gasp* Great suspenseful chapter! Awesome emotion and description too 3 |
| Project Shadow chapter 5 . 3/3/2008 Awh! X3 Good chapter! 3 Sonic should learn to butt out! *nods* |
| Whiteclaw chapter 5 . 3/3/2008 nice chapter! a few spelling and grammatical errors here and there, but all in all, a great chapter! GAH! are OC gunna come in? or do they actually exist? |
| Whiteclaw chapter 4 . 2/3/2008 cute! me see ur picz... they're nice! (i cant update, so don't comment on my picz...stupid scanner...why did I even think about relying on it..) |
| Whiteclaw chapter 3 . 2/3/2008 its "popping" up in the end...not "pooping" that means well...the end of the digestive system..except that its solid...if u know what i mean.. |
| Whiteclaw chapter 2 . 2/3/2008 LOL. I mean, the last part... anyway, cute story so far! _ |
| Whiteclaw chapter 1 . 2/3/2008 aww! SO CUTE! YEZ! :killed by sonic: |
| Ryo or Demon chapter 4 . 2/2/2008 Aww...I like Shade! I can't wait for the next story! |
| Project Shadow chapter 4 . 1/30/2008 Awh, Shadow's... 'opening' up slightly. X3 So cute! Great chapter! Though there were a few spelling mistakes and the plural of Chao is Chao 3 |
| Insert-Smiley-Face chapter 4 . 1/30/2008 Great chapter! I saw your pictures on DeviantArt! They're wonderful! I love Shade! I want a chao :( |
| Mushroom People chapter 4 . 1/29/2008 Aw, Shadow cares for Amy Sonic denys everything what a loser XD Anyways update soon |
| MarsMonster chapter 3 . 1/28/2008 lol...weirdo. good fic so far, but how did amy get hurt? i dont get it! wah! haha update soon |
