| Reviews for Rule Number 10: Never Give Cloud Chocolate |
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Marionette of Ancient Relics chapter 1 . 2/16/2019 Ahhhhhhhhh Sora. You really are always there when you're needed huh |
Lord Stalin chapter 1 . 3/20/2015 Give me the pot yo |
TeukieWookie chapter 1 . 6/15/2010 hahahaha OH GOD! CHOCLATE IS MAGICAL! -Momentai- |
twilight-zion chapter 1 . 1/11/2010 I must say, damn who would've thought that chocolate acts like the kid's version of PCP or like Rock Lee after he gets drunk as hell. Poor Leon, this is a perfect way for me to paint a picture. |
BladeMaxwell-GoddessofDeath chapter 1 . 8/24/2008 hehehe so many ideas! great write! kudos |
Lady Serena Sparrow chapter 1 . 7/5/2008 Very cute and funny. Poor Sora always so naive! The pervert in me would have loved to see that actual "event" but maybe it was for the best seeing how scary and rough Cloud could be. |
RubyBelle chapter 1 . 5/3/2008 such an interesting plotline! i love how everything was written! good job! now i wanna give cloud chocolate~ |
BlueFoxofWater1569 chapter 1 . 3/26/2008 *snort* Ack! I loved it. Oh, and Leon's actually younger than Cloud. Ah but whatever, it was great, and I laughed a little, too. |
nise-nami chapter 1 . 3/15/2008 haha. that was cute. good job! |
Thatz chapter 1 . 3/2/2008 8D WOW. CLOUD GETS HORNY OFF CHOCOLATE. THAT IS NEW. ~Thatz |
Vellacora chapter 1 . 2/22/2008 Oh Yeah Cloud as a horny monster bent on having sex with Leon with chocolate! Is super hotness XD I Love it! -Wuv the Playfulness* |
twilightpath chapter 1 . 1/27/2008 How cute! Simply adorable. You cannot leave women alone or else they start scheming. |
modeoheim chapter 1 . 1/25/2008 Ah, that was great. Really well written, too! I was laughing so hard when Cloud just dissapeared like that and wrapped his arms around Leon! Nice job :) |
Shishisama93 chapter 1 . 1/24/2008 you made a fanfic where you're implying seme-cloud and not writing out the lemon itself! O.o Shame on you! j/k, XD. just love the story itself and your writing... XD |
Billie the fourth sage chapter 1 . 1/24/2008 lol heh XD That's another reason to love chocolate, huh? XD Love it. Hilarious and diabolical XD |