This is really good! I wasn't sure what to expect at first and I was kinda surprised when Kiba/Naruto took over a bit but it made it really great! I think I'm gonna have to read more fanfics of them now lol. I thought the story was interesting and I don't believe I saw any mistakes? Admittedly, I don't know EVERY single thing that's canon (I mention 'cause you mentioned) but it's just a fanfic so it doesn't matter much if you change a couple things here and there :).

This story makes me so happy:) Can you make a sequel? I think it would be really cool if we see who Neji gets paired with, and I'd love to see Shikamaru and Choji's relationship develop even more!

best day ever!
,D

so fun! and exciting!

T.T it's ganna be ok, the author will make everything better shika

i saw it and it was scarry! *cries*
1) konkuro/choji sounds fun
2) pretending to set them up would be even better in this story

glad Ino's trying, Shikamaru walking into a wall looks funny in my head :)

i'm glad Naruto has at least Hana backing him up :)
while Ino has it 1/2 wrong it's nice to see that she can help Shikamaru and Choji. Also nice to see Shikamaru asking for social help

fag is (the original meaning) a piece of tender, something to start a fire :)
so shika's cures was actually quite literal, even if choji didn't realize that
i loved it (hinata was fun too)

it was beautiful (in it's sad way) *sparkling eyes pointed at you*

that's right, naruto, run for your life.
*whisper* not that it will save you *whisper*

i love it and i die of laugh too much

A cute and funny heartwarming story :3

No need to worry chouji was just about in character but I cant see him just offering his chips

This is a wonderful story! NaruKiba and ShikaChou are probably my new favorite yaoi pairings!