love this story. is there a sequel?

Love Mimi and her earrings, love Mark and his SAT vocabulary, love Roger and his drunkeness and love references to director commentary on the RENT dvd.

FWENDZ!

Oh hell no...he's letting her wear his scarf now? Not SCARFY! I'm gonna try to read the rest of this without being outraged at Mark/OC...I will try. Have you noticed I'm a Mark fangirl?

Hell yeah Abeth likes sleepy-Mark. But hands off cuz he's mind. Your nods to Rent are fab. M...sleepy-Mark...

Lmao at the fact that Mark said "dude...that's statutory." it's just a cute mark thing to say. And omg, Maureen is such a freak! And Roger said Abeth was hot and Mark said Maureen, all I could think of is how Anthony Rapp says Maureen in the play and the movie, and it was just too perfect. Love, love, love.

Very good. Loving Maureen and Collins and Mimi, and the joke about Roger's hair 3. I'm also loving your Mark. He's just so good and IC. I'm still wary of your OC (she's young XD) but we'll see. Mimi is so sweet in this. I think that your patchworky unroganized but very distinct dialogue works well. You're able to really establish character personalities.

This is outstanding. It's all so very in character, and that just makes it fabulous. The Mike with the Dyke line was so Marlene I laughed out loud. She's so obscene. And Mimi asking for a piggy back, cute. I lovfe how you have Mark here. People always get the nerdy but don't get the dry humor or sarcasm. I also love Roger in this. I think it's just so well done. You have made me venture into OC land, so please don't dissapoint.

ZOMG

Will you be my new best friend?

Pwease?

I just read this story in one, long, blissful read.

OHMIGOD.

I think I'm going to OD on Mark/OC beauty.

REALLY REALLY.

So, are you going to bring her back in, like, a year? When she's legal? Because that would be amazing.

I mean, when Abeth's eighteen. Not in... like... 365 days from today. Because that would KILL ME!

I love her name, by the way.

XOXO

Kristi!

Good job, although this chapter needs some...um...grammatical clarification? Maybe just beta job will do.

This is very cute, although a little confusing because of a lack of clarification with who is actually talking at times.

I'm really glad you added this because Iliked getting into the whole behind the scenes and hearing about some of the stuff you decided to cut can't wait for the sequel great job with this story!

aw that was sosweet I really wanted her to stay make a sequel where she goes back. Good story. Your a good writer.

NO!

Don't do it abeth dont do it!