sweet/sad

Atleast he learn his lesson well this is surely sad very well written

This was like soooo amazing!

You should continue! Wow, that was a shocking twist at the end!

Also, loved the song lyrics you added to her orginal song!

Oh, Chip Skylark from Fairly Odd Parents?

Well, that ended on a bright note, didn't it? Poor Ember. Oh well. In the end, she does become a famous musician, just not in the way she had expected.

I've noticed that most of the Ember fanfics I've read almost always have her committing suicide. I'm probably exaggerating, but it's just a pattern you have to notice.

oh my god that was so sad i cried it was really good

That was so good! As for Chip Skylark.. that was definetly unexpected. I loved how you looked deeper into the character of Ember. And I loved the ending.. *sob* So sad! Anyway, I hope to see you write more soon!

I thought this was pretty good. Nice work.

Woah, talk about thinking outside the box J-chan. That was amazing, but yet very very sad. Now I fell bad for Ember! Poor Ember! Chip is such a bastard for doing that to her (sticks tongue out at Chip while glaring).

Anyway, midterms are draining my brain and making me very sleepy (rubs eyelids tiredly) so I'm going to end my review now. Keep up the good work and hope to talk to you soon. Call me sometime, okay?

ja ne J-chan!

-Karin-chan

Well that was certanly original on some level, mostly Ember's time as a human is in the past, NEVER in the same time Danny and his friends were alive.

Pregnant? Damn, that certanly was a big shock.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.