If any other stories where to follow I would like to read a story set in fifth year that does not have the Toad causing trouble at Hogwarts and Ravyn as the 5th year male prefect with Hermonie.

This is so fcked u. Why would you send your money to another person while you can send the money to yourself as he changed his name? Why involve molly at all?Unless your a complete retard you will normally always place your life before other when in real danger. So he should have just changed his name while handing all his inheritance to himself using that name.

For all the ability that Harry showed fighting with Quirrelmort, I am surprised he wasn't magiced into a coma. Not a bad idea, but I half expected Fawkes to show up and do something about what Hat warned on.

-I duh no.-

I ignored this the first time I saw it, but: 'Dunno' - a contraction of "do not know". However, 'dunno' is VERY informal English. Is Ravyn that lowbrow? (Think UK, not USA.)

-IQ - 164 and I hate math...-

IQ - 132, and higher maths escapes me. On the other hand, I'm quite creative. A high IQ doesn't necessarily mean you're good at everything. :)

-a gift certificate of ten galleons-

Fifty UK pounds, or eighty US dollars. She must be a VERY good friend!

So things are becoming clearer. That's good cus I was confused lol. Thanks for sharing, great job so far.

""That is disturbing. Do you know what type…" she asked before Severus Snape saw them through the window where he was brewing his potions. The windows were in the courtyard and were elegant arches with old, slightly warped, glass.

He came outside. "Ms. Chan, Mr. Parker."

"Professor."

"Mr. Snape."

Severus looked between them, "We have rules for a reason. I will not take points from Gryffindor - but I will have to assign detention."

Ravyn and Xi Wu nodded as the woman left the two of them to their thoughts. "I'll do a bit more research. Hopefully I will be able to help you."

Ravyn nodded, smiling. "Thanks Xi Wu." he said before Snape grabbed his upper arm and all but dragged him up to Gryffindor Tower.

"You will receive the owl soon. Do not count on Professor McGonagall to be able to get you out of it."

Ravyn nodded, "Yes sir, I am sorry Sir.""

WHY was Ravyn given a detention?

JimS

"He dove.

Later, people would equate Quirrell's scream with that of a Banshee, Severus would be using it as his Patronus Memory for the next year and a half and Ravyn would remember the look of terror coming across the possessed man's face."

You should be ashamed! I was laughing so hard I almost dropped my laptop off my lap onto da floor! :o

ROFL! :)

JimS

very good story, i particularly liked the descriptions of magic.

You really don't need to be so humble in your author notes, you are a good author.

i support your idea not to retell every single year at hogwarts, but to select to most important parts and do flashback.

this was a good story, let us know when you post the sequel

Still like the story.

Don't know enough grammar/editing stuff to give a critique on that.

Just like a good story with some plot that is NOT identical to cannon [If people want that they should just re-read the damn books]

Like your chapter that included some humor.

Totally agree with your sentiments: "If you don't like a story; don't read it! It's not like there aren't a gazillion other stories out there.

DON'T get bored. Keep writing

THANKS again.

Great story. Hope you hold off on the reveal for a bunch of chapters OR the sequel.

Like the seer/magic seer angle.

Keep it going.

It would be good to see Riley/Sirius in a relationship [that will last] with Xi

THANK YOU for a good story

I'd like to see Ravyn befriend Luna in her first year.

great chapter, thank you