Amazing story. Poor J.D! Hope someone other than Kelso finds out eventually. Great story, and please UPDATE soon.

Please update? I'm dying to see everyone's reactions when they find out about JD! Pretty please?

One thing though, love? Spell check, please.

This is really good - you need to update, update, update!

Please update! This is great! I hope Dr. Cox realizes soon and can't wait to see how he reacts to the news :D

Can't wait to read more of this story, hope you have plans to continue the story.

awesome wat gonna happen next

I love this fic so much! Is there any chance of an update?

I love your story!

Your characters are in character, which is a huge plus when reading.

What i wanted to bring to your attention is that you have a lot of little spelling mistakes

that could be easily fixed. I think at one point Kelso was referred to as 'Bod'. A little proof reading will go along way.

You have really interesting story lines and it ruins the effect when you're reading this fabulously written paragraph only to have to stop to work out what some of the words are.

Other than that, i think your story is fantastic, I can't wait for an update! )

Ach! You're going to update this right? You can't leave it like that! You set this up way to well to not update. I mean... awesome story. Five chapters and you have me hooked. Thus the begging for you to continue... your character's are spot on and your story, while similar things been done before is written so well that it is still unique. UPDATE! Yeah.

Being terminally ill certainly puts the world back in perspective. You write it really well, I'm hoping you are going to continue it.

Great story so far and great chapter! I feel really sorry for JD...

Please update soon, I really want to know what happens next!

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This is awesome, please continue, i do feel sorry for JD friends though.

Please update this soon. I want to know what happens next. Please do not reply.

what? no! you must write more!

you have got to update this story. that last parting shot from jd to cox killed me. i think that this is a great story because it makes me think of my tcw and my perspective, two of thee best eps. on scrubs. we know jd can rant but people never show that in these kind of fics. keep up the good work.