Excellent tag! So spot on! Your storywould have been a terrificly tense scene in the episode...would have really shown how much Ronon really saved eVeryone!

Great tag to this ep. Quick thinking on Ronon's part, I love the mantra for Shep. Thank goodness it worked!

Great story! I love it!

Nice tag- can totally see this happening exactly as you described it. Wonderful

Oh that was a lovely little tag! Really nice imagining of what it must have been like for Sheppard and Ronon on that flight back. :)

Very nice episode missing scene! I like the way Ronon constantly reassures Sheppard and tells him how to fly; I think it really would have happened like this in the episode. Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing! :)

I really, really enjoyed this. You a wonderful grip of Ronon's frustration at trying to handle an amnesic Sheppard, but found the patience to help the pilot, knowing that all of Atlantis depended on this mission. What I loved the most was the detail of flying the jumper, that things that came so easily to John were gone and Ronon's mantra of the principle instructions to keep them flying. Awesome job of showing the illness's toll on Sheppard and Ronon's worry.

Now how about more? Ronon POV as he awaits Sheppard to wake up?

Oh, very nice indeed. One of those fics that so should have been a part of the show.

Yeah, he was having a hard time remembering what to do when they left, the ride back must have been fun. Nice missing scene. Ronon's patience must have been put to the test!

Nice job! I hadn't thought about their trip back. I bet it was scary. It is bad enough to drive when you are sick much less not knowing where you are going or how to operate the vehicle. Poor Ronon. I could see him doing exactly what you wrote!

I liked this. You've captured John's confusion and Ronon's frustration as well as his faith in Sheppard very well.