Okay, so it has just been pointed out to me that I have never reviewed this.

I absolutely love this. It's emotional and in character. That last paragraph where you add bits of everyone actually made me cry a little.

GAH

love.

love your stories

AWESOME

interesting, and makes me very sad and happy. a very sweet fic.

This fic brings tears to my eyes. Great job, you portrayed all the characters perfectly.

This was an interesting little fic to read...there was something almost childlike and innocent about the way Allen makes his assessment of each of his 'family' members (So cute). I especially liked your closing paragraph as well with what Allen thought each person would mean to him while he keeps moving forward...it's nice to see that Allen will have people with him not matter what hell he has to go through *grin* Awesome writing. Loved it!

Great job! I love how you compare Miranda to a firefly; very fitting. Excellent analysis of all the characters, and I thought the way you presented everything was very good too. Not to mention it flowed quite well.

Nice work! .

TTmTT Now I really hope that no one dies in the manga, anime, and series! TTmTT