okay dont like the ending and i wanted more of dean taking care of sam:(

Awesome story! Thanks for writing.

Poor Sam!

Nice one..thnx

Awwwwww that was such a great story- absolutely wonderful! 3

Lovely. I really liked how this played out. Great job with the characterization.

Oh whoa, that's intense. Bad things happen when Sam and Dean are mad at each other and split up...

Great story. John should have told Dean he needed his knife and asked him for it. Please keep up the great work.

Aww! Great story. Well done.

I like the way tou stay in characters and don't wander through heavy chickflick moments. Love your stories

The love of two brothers and a father. I just love it(:

As always, very well-composed and written. So poignant and eloquent! Thank you for composing and sharing! My favorite part: "Dean held out a glass of water to Sam, angling the straw into his mouth and waiting until he'd taken a few small sips... "Yeah right …don't think you'll be winning any beauty contests this year."

Great job and keep on writing!

LOVE IT ,IF THERE'S NO FALLOUT

GOOD ONE HERE ...AND JUST OFF TO CHAPTER 2

I knew Dean would feel guilty. The truly sucky part is that poor Sammy didn't even steal the damn knife to begin with. I feel bad for Dean too. I'm sure that this taught him a huge lesson. They're just lucky taht guy didn't succeed in getting Sammy in the van.

OMG I'm sure Dean is going to feel like a complete ass. His baby brother was almost kidnapped by some pervert and then cut really badly and all Dean cares about is his knife. Poor Sammy. Excellent job!