-blushes and cuddles an imaginary Miles plushie-

I love this story. I always have. Thank you for writing it :)

After reading ' life dosen't work that way' this small one shot really is a balm to my heart. I still believe this is closer to canon then the canon itself.

...*fangirl scream*
*pass out*

Awesome :)

I'm really enjoying all your Ace Attorney fics, so I guess I'll leave a longer review this time! :D In all your fics I notice you have a very good grasp on Edgeworth's personality. He is often portrayed in an overly sympathetic light, and typically when fanfiction writers write him with 3rd person he is too kind, and his inner monologue OOC. You manage to strike the perfect chord with Edgeworth's characterization. He's indifferent, but not cruel, and has a keen moral sense of what's right and what's wrong. And like in the games, he chooses to express his better side with actions rather than words. Showing not telling; everyone knows it but few actually apply it with their writing! Lol.

What else? The dialogue between him and Phoenix never seem forced. In addition I don't feel too much awkward tension between the two at potentially hard-to-write scenes; for example, the transition from friendly banter to sex. What stands out most to me though is your excellent writing. It's smooth and to the point much like Edgeworth himself! Hehe. Here, I like the way you intersperse narration with dialogue:

"Hey, would you mind sparing some change?"

It had all started with that stupid, ridiculous question.

"Hey?"

He'd heard him before. He asked everybody that. Sometimes he got change, and most often he'd strike out. That was how being homeless worked. He passed by him everyday, never stopping, never caring.

"Help a guy out?"

All it took was one time.

Even though you use short, one sentence paragraphs often, the writing doesn't feel clipped or terse. I'm always afraid of using many short paragraphs myself because I think that it comes off pretentious, stylistically. (Likewise when authors fiddle too much with the italics or have breaks every three paragraphs). But here it seems very natural and even added to the work.

In short, you are a great writer. Expect more reviews from me and thank you for posting your works up on FF!

Ah I loved it! Beautifully written.

3 THIS IS SO CUTE! :D

And, I know a few others already saidthis, but...

"Objection! The defence has no clothes for afterward!"

And

"He was falling for a hobo. A defence hobo."

Just made me Lol. XD

Great job! ;D

*wibbles*

I loved this...just gorgeous...:D

You know, a lot of dramas nowadays (or maybe just the Asian ones) follow the "Cinderella" plotline.

And the whole time while reading your fanfic, I cannot help but think, perhaps the Cinderella thing has invaded the fanfic world as well? Heh heh heh. Not that I have anything against it. Who can grow out of fairytales? _

I love how simple this story is. *sighs in content* Perfect for a chilly day. Especially with the hot bath and all. So, I'm going to save this and come back once winter strikes.

Thank you~~

I absolute love this fanfiction. It is so honest and simple without needless drabbles. And yet even when there is silence, you can just imagine their thoughts intertwining and rambles for hald hour. xD LOL. Anyways, I actually read this a while back and favourite'd it but I just got the first PWAA game and finished case 4 so I wanted some edgeyxfeenie love. xD again xD anyways, great job!

Silence. Not a “Hey, thanks!” or a “Wow, this is really strange,” or even a nostalgic “Objection! The defense has no clothes for afterward!”

...

He was falling for a hobo. A Defense Hobo.

These two bits really made the piece for me. This entire story was fantastic, but for some reason these lines made me fall in love with your portrayal of Edgeworth and his reaction/consideration of Phoenix. Your story flowed very well and your characterizations were extremely believable. The end in particular made me grin, but I also loved when Phoenix and Edgeworth first met. You could really feel Edgeworth's surprise.

Very well done. )

It was so short and still managed to touch my heart. Beautiful writing and it was descriptive enough to paint a clear picture every step of the way. Fantastic writing!

Aww that was so sweet! Fluff owns all! _

The line "He was falling in love with a hobo. A defense hobo." made I laugh.

Great job!

...oh but one thing, aren't Phoenix's eyes brown? Or is this just me being stoopid? O_o;

Anyways, keep up the good work!

That was so nice yet i found it sorta funny cuz seeing Nicky as a hobo is just a weird sight lol very well done and awesome :)

~Wuv the Playfulness*