Could you have a ShikaSaku chapter? That'd be so awesome!

This is so sad! I love how you show Naruto. I can totally see his childhood like that. The hole story is great

THIS I LIKE! (but NARUSAKU is still the best) it was so sad -boohoo- now time for request : NARUSAKU HAPPY! no sad... prompts...it has to do with trees and butterfiles and elephants

if i ever meet you be sure to meet your doom... (also on the first line their should be a ?) and you repetad (i know i spelt that and this wrong) the first line.

I LOVED IT! I really liked how you described the mirrors and the short thing before the title! I also noticed a mistake it's in my favourite part. My favourite part would have to be the "Once upon a time, there was (a) (you forgot the "a") girl e.t.c I loved it! but i think when you were saying how she was picky and selective i did not enjoy it that much... BUT NEXT TIME WRITE A HAPPY NARUSAKU! or else -gr-.

-Riku

i know! Yuki can be a very cold fruit! IM A GENUIS! but this story... im afraid 2 say I CRIED! ITS SO SAID!

However, he hid it quite well. So well, he even hid it from himself.

I loved that part. Hiding something, an emotion, from yoursel, it's just so deep. Very nice.

I thnk I'm gonna like this series of fairytales. So more soon please!

Oh, and a ORANGE! sorry, sorry, I'm a bit hyper today _'

-Elie

that was so cute!...but sad...aw

yuki kinda reminds me of a pineapple...don't ask, i don't know why