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what happend? :(
why? was a good story, this is just sad

Look, personally I think this is a good idea and I would love to see what you could do with this. But you just follow canon way too much. I don't read fanfiction to re-read the series. And I kind of skipped most of your chapters because there were way too many details that I already knew. However this would be perfect for s newbie so there is that. Also personally I didn't feel much emotion with Naruto's nightmares maybe that was my fault but i felt nothing. Maybe if we could see more of the effects with Naruto and the curse mark. Anyway I'm sorry for being a negative bitch but keep in mind that a lot of people do like your story and that this is just my lousy interpretation of your fic.

I got to chapter 4 and I just can't continue with this story. There is an inconsistency of of words used in the Japanese language and the use of the words is annoying and just should not be used. Also, the story for the story does not fallow the right path and the diologe does not Mach the manga or the anime. It pissed me off more the the other mistakes you made. Sincerely a pissed reader

I love your story please update it real soon. Thanks.

I mean 7 years... Way to follow through with your stories and leave your fans hanging like that!

Way to finish the story for your viewers.. Been almost 3 years since last update and you call yourself a proud writer. Hmpf

u shouldn't follow canon too much...its as if...EVERY detail are canon...

CANT WAIT 4 NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!

Sweet but you may want to use OCs for effect instead of just for fun. I reduces the Naruto experience

Good fic though go on with it

This story is great! It has been a long time since your last update, please update soon.

Why have you stopped writing? this is such an amazing fic! D: oh, well... if your not going to write anymore then you should take it down so that you dont get people intrested and then just not finish it... T_T but your story was amazing! :D

Hi. No offence at all, but this story is starting to sound like...well...like the TV show "Naruto". Please, let me explain.

This story is supposed to be about Ororchimaru biting Naruto and the struggles Naruto has with both the curse mark and his confidence in himself, correct?

Well, so far (and like I said, no offence), this is starting to sound like you're retelling the episodes but in story-form.

Please try to add more "struggles" -(paragraph 2) to the next chapter if you decide to update anytime soon.

Thank you for taking time out to read this,

~Overlander43

PLEASE continue soon! This version of Naruto is brilliant, and, if you are continuing your story, I am looking forward to if Naruto defects from the village o.O

Update soon please~ )