So little words.. Yet so much emotion! I love it!

Amazing. I love the way Wade always surprise Charlie in the movie (we see it very well when he tells Dan he will give him his horses back). I think the most surprising act is when Wade kill Charlie. I have been expected it, but when you are Charlie, when you know only a part of the story, you can't expect that your boss is going to kill you. Your OS is IC, well written and heart-breaking. I know it's been a while since you published it, but would you mind if I translated it into French ?

Man I love this so much. I love Charlie Prince he was my fav character in 3:10 to Yuma. Great job with this story.

Charlie is my favorite in the movie! And I think it was sad when he died because he was so loyal to Ben! But I like the way you wrote this, short and sweet! Great job!

Oh, that's just the saddest thing. A great job writing. )

Nice. Poetic and very IC.

This is wonderful, I love the way you've written this scene. In such a short span of words, you've really just captured a lot of emotion and it's pretty powerful.

It's great.

Dear God that's good.

you know, there's a 3:10 to Yuma category now, so you could relocate this if you want...:)

Gorgeous, and fitting for Charlie. It's not too drawn out, but it has surprising depth. And that last sentence, perfect.

-Reiya

Wow. This story is beautifully written. I love it. Charlie was deffinatly my favorite character in the movie. Too bad there's hardly any 3:10 To Yuma stories...

Aw, that was brilliant. I actually felt sorry for Charlie in the end and hated the fact he was killed. :( Good work!

Aww, short, but still very good. That was just the saddest scene ever, when Charlie died... There's a serious lack of Yuma fics out there, so I'm glad to have found one!

Awesome.

Short but wonderful. I wish there were more 3:10 to Yuma fics out there but this one is fantastic. I actually felt more emotional when Ben Wade killed Charlie over Charlie killing the rancher, whose name escapes me...your writing style is wonderful and you nearly broke my heart with this short vignette. Well done.