| Reviews for Hinata's Wish |
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QueenDeadPool chapter 1 . 1/14/2018 I really like this I wish there was more. |
Sephiroth 200 chapter 1 . 12/6/2014 All you need is love hinata! |
music4life1203 chapter 1 . 6/22/2014 ... a dream. A DREAM! THIS WAS A DREAM! -_- |
raphaella18 chapter 1 . 5/5/2012 short |
MisaHyuga chapter 1 . 11/10/2010 This was a a beautiful story. I had felt her desire at the end. It was so sweet, brutal, but sad at the end. I love the story. :) |
Towards the sun chapter 1 . 10/21/2010 What a hot sweet romantic lemon... Anyway, is it hinata's flashback or only her imagination? It's so real! |
Blissfulltorment chapter 1 . 3/10/2010 Wow... that was... brutal and sweet at the same time... Until the end when it was explained to be just a fantasy. But it makes me wonder, what was going through your head when you wrote the end? I mean... Hinata was masturbating to thoughts of her and Kyuubi-Naruto pretty much raping her? Anyway, the sweet and lovey parts of the lemon were good, the rest not so much. |
SethFC chapter 1 . 8/27/2009 Beautiful... |
RedFox20 chapter 1 . 4/22/2009 Wow, this was a really powerful story! Excellent work on the writing, even though the formatting is a bit weird, the whole fantasy itself is just... fantastically well written :P Keep up the good work! |
Dragonfly51 chapter 1 . 11/26/2008 I liked it a lot. The whole story being italic kind of through me little a little. |
Omna chapter 1 . 7/9/2008 I can't wait to read the next chapter come out.! |
hinatakyuubilover chapter 1 . 3/2/2008 wow that is all i can say. |
Topaznik-Citrine chapter 1 . 2/2/2008 O! YOU MAKE ME CRY! |
noname00 chapter 1 . 1/23/2008 your fic was poetic in a way and i liked it |
hyuuga's pale rose chapter 1 . 1/21/2008 Aw, damn! So...none of that really happened? I'm confused. It was so good, it can't be a day dream right? P.S. More!1 |