This is good... I mean really good... this is exactly how Brendan would have reacted to the news of Freya... I love the dropping the pizza from his mouth with the surprise... and the pink shirt... gee, thanks mom. Lovely details.

And it'd be good, if you were ever to write more TC...

I enjoyed this story and thought it was well written. Good job! Thanks for sharing it.

Very nice start. :) You have his thoughts down very well, sounds very much like him. You need to write more now. *g*

Aw, I adore! :) Nicely done, m'dear and I could totally see him doing the little stuff you had him doing. :) *claps*

:claps: Fantastic! You write Brendan well! :D (So well that you should write Brendan more often. ;)) Poor guy! Sounds like he's having a Monday. :pats him: