the development of the story is tiring. it's repetitive and the soulmate part should be destroyed to add more drama. vaan should reject him first before something happens and they finally get their happy ever after. also he's supposed to be the avatar but nothing of that part has played out yet.

This was an extremely good story. Such a shame that you gave up on it... well whatever. You're a good writer. I hope that one day you decide to pick up where you left off, you'll always have a fan in me. :-)

The obscenely imaginative GrinDLmania.

Is the author dead cause they haven't updated anything or given notices in about 4 years now...

Hi, I know it's been 6 years or something since an update, but are you considering to continue this story?

I’ve read this story before and I like the way you wrote it from the perspective of a person in a high position in Archadia (whether it is Harry or not is immaterial, I just don’t see many of those). I’m kind of sad though that this story seems to have stalled from when I last read it. I can see so many directions that it could go in from this point. I know you plan to have Vaan and Balthier (and by extension, Fran) go with Harry to Earth but I’m interested to see what happens after.

I do approve however of your non-traditional approach to wizards appearing in Ivalice. No Ron or Hermione, which I’m used to seeing as one of the first contacts with Harry when they do appear. Good job on that.

I do hope that you haven’t decided to abandon this story, it’s very engaging and has a ton of potential even at this stage.

I swear to god. Vaan doesn't deserve Harry at all.

Please, please, please, don't use Snape as Harry's uncle. He is nothing but a spiteful, bitter man!

Good

So I can assume that this story had been abandoned or, at least, put on a mostly semi-permanent hiatus given the fact that it's certainly not over but hasn't been updated since 2013.
Still, I will follow the story in hopes that it is updated again soon, and offer huge amounts of praise to the story in the mean time. FFXII is still my favorite Final Fantasy game and you certainly do it justice.

Hope you'll one day return to this story, it's really well written and interesting :)
At least, the part of Vayne and Larsa's coronation is finished, I would have been sad if it hadn't been xd

love thi story cant wait for new chapters

I think this story's pretty awesome, badass Harry and all, but there's one thing I can't get over. So Harry and Vaan are supposed to have repercussions for hurting other, but Harry slaps Vaan for almost leaking his secret and he gets an incurable wound on his hand, but Vaan fucking slits Harry's throat for killing his brother, something that Harry didn't even do, and he gets fucking nothing? How is that fair or even consistent?

...and now that I've gotten that out, I have to say that I love the details that you put into your writing. It feels like Harry's part of the game world itself, even as your plot diverges from canon.

This is one of the best Final Fantasy and Harry Potter crossover I have ever read. The only reason it isn't the best is because I am pretty sure you have lost interest, or you have lost the muse that gave this story to you. I really do hope you come back to this story eventually.

Excellent, fantastic, and imaginative. I do hope you finish this story. I look forward to any updates you make in the future. Keep up the outstanding work.

I love this story and hope you finish it one day