Hot smut, and you managed to make it really sweet as well. Loving it! :)

Great little story and very well written! “…that what they’re doing hasn’t even been discussed beyond the heat of a shared gaze, beyond the slow ache of a brief, lingering touch, beyond a tender kiss on the verge of death. “ My favorite line…very beautiful.

“Her hair is beautiful in the dim light, he notices. As always.” And this line got my attention too. Less because of the line itself (although her hair is beautiful), but more because this is not the kind of line I usually expect right after the description of pretty wild smut, but it was a great idea of you to write it there and it says so much about Adama….

I really liked this! You have a wonderful knack for description, and yet you somehow managed to be brief - no long, flowery rambles for you, nosiree!

Also, your writing style kind of seems eerily similar to mine - or at least, the "mine" I've actually bothered to notice. It kind of pleased me to read this, in a prideful way _;.

Mf, this was so hot! *dashes off to a cold shower*

Uh, the commentary at the bottom is demanding I make a well-rounded critique, but I honestly can't find anything bad in this :). You managed to take some cliches this 'ship has, and make them new and refreshing while in the same vein as the old ones :D.

This was lovely and light and fun. Thanks for sharing!

Interesting and secretive.

I like this line: “Oh, Bill, you don’t even need to ask.” She tries not to giggle, kisses him one last time for the pleasure of being able to do so, and steps sideways out of the closet, as neatly put together as she ever is.

Cute :D