Nice story . Love all your stories. But missed Polka dots :(

Waahhh... perfect story. Cute endingi really love it Thnks for the great story

i knew it,that it was aoi from the beginning...yeheeyyyyyyyyyy by the way love your story

Real nice kept me hooked till the end ;-) keep up the good work

You did a great job! Thank you!

Good story!

The baby comes, obviously (rolls eyes) :P
NO! Or actually, yeah. Mikan gives birth to the baby and then Natsume and Mikan are driving without the baby (they just dropped the baby off), and they get into a car accident...
What happens? Mikan remembers while...
Natsume forgets!
Then you have a sequel ED

Did they make love? Did they not? Why didn't you include it?! DXXXX
But anyway, I could've sworn I had a comment for a different chapter that I didn't see worthy of my one comment on that chapter...
But I frigging forgot it! (cries blood out of wide eyes)
Oh wait, now I remember. (at least I remember the one I wasn't actually planning to write) You're so kind. (cuz you accept any kind of comment- not many people will just say 'i'll accept your worst' in the chapter ToT even people who do accept criticisms wont say it in the beginning)
Wow, that was a long comment. And it only had a bit of stuff * -*
But anyway, let me tell you this. My dad thinks that someone with horrible grammar can't write a good story. I'm trying to refute an explain, telling him that despite your horrible grammar, the plot and all are AMAAAAZING! :D But he doesn't seem to understand 'llD
You are a living example of someone who has horrible grammar but awesome stories. I mean, seriously, there could be some stupid kid that barely knows ANY grammar but still gets his story across, and in that, the people reading ignore his grammar because his stories are so awesome!

Nice chappy! Please Go ahead & Good Luck...!

wow love it

What a cute ending! I like the names, they are like a mix of their own.

Natsume- Natsuki
Mikan- Mika

This is the most beautiful story, I have ever read. Keep it up man! Best wishes...

Waaaaah xD

Your way of writing became more enhanced. It improved a great deal. Though I must remind you of some of your sentences which are written in wrong grammar. But overall, it's a pretty nice story. :)

Your writing skills are getting better. A lot of improvements can be read in this chapter. :)