My my, wasn't this an interesting fanfiction. I was surprised to see you bring in Altair so quickly. It was in no way an unpleasant surprise though. The ending of this chapter was cute, I think, and definitely in-character.
Thank you for that! I have seen way too many great plots ruined by terrible story/script writing as well as the lack of keeping people in their own personality. I have to admit the bus scene was very interesting (the introduction). It was not what I expected, the fact that you made your OC have a not-so-great place in life and the skills department was not like others (then again, those were all horrid stories).

Basically, you've made quite a good "gets transported to universe" fanfiction. I'm not sure if you're going to continue this since it looks like it was updated a pretty long time, but I guess I'm content with just leaving it like this. Good work though, I thoroughly enjoyed the read.

-Kiyoshi-baka

Oh please write more! Pretty pretty please!

I would really like for you to update this. It sounds interesting but I need more to form an opinion. You haven't updated in a few months over two years.

It is sad that so many fanfictions that start out really well never get finished. I understand that "real life" is more important, however, and I hope that that is going well for you.

Thank you for a well-written and intriguing beginning.

Continuing would be appreciated and so far it has been a pleasure to read. 3

Nehh ur chapters r really short but other then that i thought it was really good :)

Okay, please update your good work, will you? Please! It is a very promising start and I am looking forward to your next great chapter!

Wow, frankly, I'm quite disappointed. Disappointed that you haven't updated in months.

This fic has absolutely amazing potential, I agree, and your style of writing is simply marvelous. You make the characters human, Evelyn especially, and there's something about her that makes the reader easily emphathise with her, something that is not easy to do, given the precarious tendencies of fanfiction writers to fall into the whole "Mary Sue" things. Evelyn isn't perfect, and that's what makes her so perfect in our eyes. She's human, and we like that. But props go to you for making it that way.

Great descriptions, and well written. I do hope you update soon; this fic is absolutely amazing.

I like this story is so...well awesome! I like the fact that Evelyn is so human its just really cool cause alot of people will be able to tell what she going through, most people just can't get that into their stories like you. I know I sure can't and I admire you for it. I hope you update soon because you just gained another loyal reader and reveiwer. I hope you update soon I really love your story it's enjoyable and and easy to understand. Anyway I'll reveiw on your next chapter.

Until then, Bye.

Nice idea, can't wait for the next chapter.

Its a great story so far. Looking foward to reading more of your work in the future. Keep up the good work.

I like this story. _ It's a very interesting idea. :3 I'd love to see more.

This is great! There aren't many good stories on Assassin's Creed, but this one is so far the best!

Keep going, I would like to know what happens!

Another beautiful chapter! I like how human your character is. It makes it very possible for the reader to get in her shoes. Great job, and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

This is a great story please update soon!