LOVE.

HARRY AND GINNY FOREVER.
THEY ARE MIGHT TO BE.

loved it

Really interesting! I like the conflicts, the monologue and generally all of it. Well written!

Great story! I've just read the 3-rd chapter from the artifice of night, thinking i'd be reading the 4-th, when i realized that there was no 4-th chapter yet. But you saved yourself from my wrath with this fluffy little thing!

"She was like that, he thought, always placing herself in places and situations in which she shouldn’t be. In which he shouldn’t be." Bet you she placed herself willingly in some of those situations! Loved the story, love your style, so keep writing ( tell those that are keeping you busy in real life that some very important people are waiting for you in the FF-world and they'll not be happy if you don't get the time you need!)

Waiting on new chapters to any of your stories...

That was great I'm so glad you started writing again. Please keep going.

i really liked this...alot.

i not sure if i get exactly why you used only "he" and "she" but i am guessing that this way the reader is forced to only see these two characters just as the characters see themselves...alone with the other but i am most likely wrong but i loved this story and i look forward to reading more work by you in the future!

Charlene

i just read this on siye and couldn't review because- well, if i *am* a memeber, i've long since forgotten my handle. so, i took a chance to see if you'd posted elsewhere. it's lovely. it's got that sweet, sharp twang reminiscent of That Muted Sort of Longing (the epiphany of well-written h/g). i loved it, though i enjoy your writing in general.

thanks for the read.

Amazing, as is all of your work. I'm looking forward to updates from your other stories!

-Frances Flick

that was fabulously amazing! very well done as usual. exactly why the he and she?

Glad to see you writing again. Hope you update more often from now on. Anyways nice one shot. Loved the little summary for it. It sounded so deep. I don't think your writing has worsened but rather improved slightly. It was a very sweet one shot. It was bliss to read it. Take Care!

J.D

you have noting to worry about it was amazimg! a perfect mix of angst and romance

Brilliant. Absolutely amazing.

simply WOW! I think I actually stopped breathing near the end. Thanks, it was amazing.

Ooh, wasn't that good?

Everything and everyone was in character, so that was good, and it was all rather good. No need to be insecure about your writing! It has been good, it is good, and it will always be good.

As you can probably tell I have a very limited vocabulary this evening, I blame overworking...

Anyway, please ravage a thesaurus and insert exaggerated and extravagant synonyms in place of my 'good's.

And I'm talking about the word in my review, not my womanly assets, if you were wondering.

:)

Great story! I'm so glad your back; I love your H/G stories and I was in need of another really good one ;-) So yeah, I'm not entirely sure why you only used "he" and "she" during the story. Would you like to explain? lol Anyways great job!