It saddens me that this story hasn’t been updated

Dying in exitment reading then realise its been a very long time since update

Finish please ;.;

Soooo close to the finish, it would be great if you could update and finish this. This is such an amazing story!

This is one of the best pokemon fanfictions I have read, and a read that I am most definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next! I love this story, keep up this amazing work!

What link? I can't find the link.

I shall try my best not to be impatient but... I will say that this cliffhanger/ending is evil. I won’t be able to sleep for the next few days without thinking about what will happen next, I do hope you get back to it soon!

Please, post the remaining chapters. You haven't updated since 2016 and the suspense is really killing me. PLEASE UPDATE.

She was winning but he was taking no damage no side affects from the damage. Especially from several attacks. And while she knows the weakness of Steph

She’s either strong or weak, not strong but while giving the opponent god mode.

A better way of doing the fight would be doing a more real fight and her was easily winning the fight not mysteriously losing out of nowhere.
Then after she won stayed with them for a while more until she was asked by Steph before an important fight or she decided she fancied getting stronger.

Try to decide more objective in fights out have a start point to the fight “mc finding out his reasoning with a great chance at winning”
And an end point mc becoming Stephs Pokemon. As you couldn’t change tracks halfway through you had to give mc god mode.

A better way of solving the issue would’ve been to change the start. I.e mc is weak and gets trounced, she realises this and trusts him to get her stronger when caught. Or wait a little longer for an opportunity to occur to change tracks. I.e she asks wanting to battle to grow and for company or he persuades her with food..

All in all this has really got potential. I enjoyed everything else other than the godmode

I disagree with this fight

AmaZing story so close to being finished... but it isn't D:

Noooooooo! Not a cliff hanger! I just found the story and I Loved it, but I'm so invested now! I would really like to see the ending please?

I'm assuming you quit writing and that you probably won't even see this, but I just want to say that this fic was great. I feel pretty sad that we might not ever receive a conclusion, but I'm not going to spam reviews to try and force an update. If something's going on in your life instead, I hope it blows over soon.

plz update soon.

its Sept. 29, 2018 today and you still havent updated since oct. 16, 2016... why?